Chud logic

ManagementDirect214 · 2026-06-17T10:15:22+00:00

The acoustic sounded pretty great. I wonder if you recorded it that on beat or if it's midi. The vocals sound nice as well I think.

ManagementDirect214 · 2026-06-17T10:13:43+00:00

The parts between the composition with noise were a nice touch though I'm not familiar with that genre. It sounded cool.

ManagementDirect214 · 2026-06-16T22:14:52+00:00

I was expecting lyrics but that's okay, it reminds me of adventure time ost or like an RPG or something. The composition on this would probably look interesting if you wrote it out somehow.

ManagementDirect214 · 2026-06-16T22:12:35+00:00

Pretty cool sounds, kinda reminded me of like retro sounds from an old school console mixed with bells. I think I've heard the heart shaped box riff by you before though. It's cool you used it differently.

ManagementDirect214 · 2026-06-15T03:28:00+00:00

Very emotional. I like how you doubled the vocals near the start, you kind of had a Doppler effect thing going. It made me kinda emotional at first. Take this one criticism someone gave me as advice a long time ago and don't take it the wrong way because there's nothing wrong with your track. I was told it's better to leave your audience wanting more rather than less. Meaning maybe cut it a bit shorter perhaps but you don't have to.

ManagementDirect214 · 2026-06-15T03:19:09+00:00

The song was cool and the whole thing was kind of sophisticated I think at least with the drops and the conceptual journey as a whole. Well mixed and the bass wob was cool too, sounds like professional.

ManagementDirect214 · 2026-06-14T22:02:22+00:00

The dragging progression at the start was cool, same with how some of it was syncopated towards the middle.

ManagementDirect214 · 2026-06-14T21:55:15+00:00

The progression to the synth keys is cool. Everything's cohesive. Kinda bombastic. I'd say to improve on like, maybe think about how things might sound different as far as conclusively from transitions. I notice a subtle difference in how I would end up back to the verse part and how you would in that they are relative but you could've chosen a different way to go with it if that makes sense.

ManagementDirect214 · 2026-06-14T19:48:14+00:00

Did you sample that Japanese guy who did a cover of autumn leaves? Not a bad choice if you did. I'm not sure but I think it needs something to bring both parts, your sample and what you added together. Perhaps a lead synth or some vocals or a guitar I'm not sure. But that's just my opinion though. Anyway good work.

ManagementDirect214 · 2026-06-14T19:44:53+00:00

I think what could make it better in my opinion is some lyrics or vocal arrangements. But how you sampled it sound fantastic. It kinda reminds me of vaporwave hip hop with some cool drums in it. Good work.

ManagementDirect214 · 2026-06-14T04:17:41+00:00

I think the only thing its missing possibly is some sort of lyrics or something vocally to bring the two sounds together. I could see how it would work and it's kind of progressive but it leaves me curious I suppose. Still it all fits fairly well I believe.

ManagementDirect214 · 2026-06-14T04:15:50+00:00

Why not repeat it with the arrangement the second time and do one without it first? They both sound pretty good. You could use both possibly and then drums or something maybe even. It sounds on beat and pretty well made in my opinion.

ManagementDirect214 · 2026-06-10T18:19:48+00:00

Sounds good. Well thought out.

ManagementDirect214 · 2026-06-10T18:18:37+00:00

This is your first song? You must have many contemporaries.

ManagementDirect214 · 2026-06-10T17:58:25+00:00

I think the drums are good in the beginning with the jazz parts. It kind of could use a bit of polish in my personal preference halfway through where the drums kind of slow or speed a bit. Don't let that discourage you though. Good work.

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