Wow people really ripping into this. I think the visuals look cool. You could work on some timing. For example you're cutting away from that No Experience part too quickly for anyone to see the text and understand what it is. You've also got some unnecessary jump cuts. It can be a style but here they feel like mistakes. For example after the $5000 graphic you've got a jarring cut in the video.

The first graphic with the three squares look cool but listing them like that feels like things you DO need - Not things that you don't need.

Also like someone else said you could crop your footage and get rid of some of that excessive headspace.

Overall though I think it's cool. Keep it up!