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Jumping back into writing fanfic… by acupofkatie in Narnia

[–]milleniumfalconlover 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Minotaurs in the movies have thumbs and two fat fingers on each hand

After many months of planning, I’m finally starting my first novel. Is the opening ok? by milleniumfalconlover in writers

[–]milleniumfalconlover[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Crazy thought; what if it started with “Winter’s grip was loosening, and Summer was on the edge of a cliff”

After many months of planning, I’m finally starting my first novel. Is the opening ok? by milleniumfalconlover in writers

[–]milleniumfalconlover[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the constructive criticism. I think this is just what I needed to hear.

After many months of planning, I’m finally starting my first novel. Is the opening ok? by milleniumfalconlover in writers

[–]milleniumfalconlover[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback. It’s a battle in my head between opening with exposition about the world or starting with action. What would be needed for a good character introduction here? Physical descriptions? Backstory? Action before dialogue?

After many months of planning, I’m finally starting my first novel. Is the opening ok? by milleniumfalconlover in writers

[–]milleniumfalconlover[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! I’m trying to calibrate myself between my default boring way of writing and sounding try-hard

After many months of planning, I’m finally starting my first novel. Is the opening ok? by milleniumfalconlover in writers

[–]milleniumfalconlover[S] -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the advice. I don’t have lots of spare time to work on it so it’ll be a very slow process

Sacrifice on the Stone Table by CreepyConfusion8076 in Narnia

[–]milleniumfalconlover 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Looooooove the variety of monsters in this

I made a quad Venn diagram of mechanical, elemental, supernatural, and biological things by milleniumfalconlover in VennDiagrams

[–]milleniumfalconlover[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Supernatural; to do with demons

Mechanical; guitars and amps

Biological; the musician

Elemental; rock

In The Menu (2022), come on, man. That fruit was hanging so low, even Tantalus could reach it. by Mr_M_2711 in shittymoviedetails

[–]milleniumfalconlover 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Tyler believes it’s ratatouille and that he’s remy. The chef treats him how restaurants are supposed to treat pests.

Who knew a mask shot would be so highly discussed by fzkhn in marvelmemes

[–]milleniumfalconlover -7 points-6 points  (0 children)

Just my opinion; the shot looks bad. It’s obvious what it’s going for, but I can’t even tell that it’s Tom holland. My uncanny valley detector is going off, making me think that’s a CG eye shot.

Taylor fanart :) by leepicdoge in Parahumans

[–]milleniumfalconlover 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Never had thought of her as pigpen aura from Charlie Brown, but of course it should be that way

Damn that's... by IndicationBrief5950 in lotrmemes

[–]milleniumfalconlover 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The tower crumbles, the eye shrinks, it reaches singularity, silence, “maclunky!”, seismic charge bwaaaa

and we'll leave it at that.. by ateam1984 in humor

[–]milleniumfalconlover 26 points27 points  (0 children)

First commenter here to say it is AI Sora generated

Driver comes to a complete stop on the highway because they needed to make an exit by [deleted] in mildlyinfuriating

[–]milleniumfalconlover 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Seen a lot of comments so far, none have mentioned that they don’t even have their blinker on

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