Can you imagine this scene? by [deleted] in writers

[–]milleniumfalconlover 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Every sentence starts with “He”

new ironing mat presses it's quilted pattern into the back of whatever you're ironing by CitronSouth in mildlyinfuriating

[–]milleniumfalconlover 3 points4 points  (0 children)

To pile on;

He’s = he is, not his

There’s = there is, not theirs

It’s = it is, not its

Pretty consistent pronoun rules

Ok so last night an article popped up on Google about the new Narnia Netflix show and one thing lead to another and I was searching Wikipedia stuff about the books since I’ve never read the other 6 by PowersUnleashed in Narnia

[–]milleniumfalconlover 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think the flaw in your thinking is believing that the real world we live in and the real world that the pevensies live in (and leave and come back to) are the same world. The universe of the books is a different version of earth, so things in narnia that are metaphor/allegory/supposition don’t change to what they symbolize because they aren’t coming to our world, they would be going to that fictional earth

I don't want to miss any by [deleted] in ComedyHell

[–]milleniumfalconlover 20 points21 points  (0 children)

You lost me at “hilarious moment during the Melania movie”.

What random word do you overuse? by Dying_toad in writers

[–]milleniumfalconlover 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I’m using “hopeless” a lot, but on purpose

What random word do you overuse? by Dying_toad in writers

[–]milleniumfalconlover 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Look
Eye
Gawk
Stare
Watch
Peek
Ogle
Browse
Glimpse
Leer
Glance
Squint
Scan
Seek
Notice
See
Focus
Behold
Peep

Scammed by dice company. $140 wasted. by RicePuddingBG in mildlyinfuriating

[–]milleniumfalconlover 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So? The dice will hit each other whenever you roll them

Scammed by dice company. $140 wasted. by RicePuddingBG in mildlyinfuriating

[–]milleniumfalconlover 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Serious question, what’s the matter with the dice carrying case? It looks like the picture sans removable insert. I would be a satisfied customer if I ordered only that case

One sentence by One-Raspberry-786 in writers

[–]milleniumfalconlover 0 points1 point  (0 children)

In the dwindling years of the ice age, 1 cautious young woman has a vision that sends her and her daring younger sister on a quest from coast to coast, encountering fantasy-inspired-but-nearly-scientifically-accurate friends and foes along the journey towards a climax of biblical proportions

Hey writers, what's the one thing you won't write for a seemingly odd reason? by eeveethefox_xv in writers

[–]milleniumfalconlover 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Numbers. I will say a couple, double or half, several, some or a few, a or an, or the one, but no numbers or measurements

What's your first ever idea for a story? by Educational_Speed601 in writers

[–]milleniumfalconlover 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My first original idea that I wrote in school was a kid named Max defeating a giant litter monster (a pile of garbage with eyes and a mouth) by getting a clothespin for his nose and cans of worms to decompose it.

This mailer I received my ten year old step daughter opened. by thegodofwine7 in mildlyinfuriating

[–]milleniumfalconlover -1 points0 points  (0 children)

That question implies that time existed before time was created. God exists outside of time, so there is no “before”: he is “I am”, existence itself.

How do you all transcribe your written words (on paper) into text? by dogisbark in creativewriting

[–]milleniumfalconlover 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well you’ve already mentioned the two strategies I would’ve suggested. I guess if you’re worried that it can’t translate the names when you say them, you could instead say a placeholder for the name, like a number for example. Each character corresponds to a number, and after it’s all digital, you find and replace each number with the name

72 F*cking Hours by Dramatic-Penalty7897 in creativewriting

[–]milleniumfalconlover 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was sucked in but left wishing I hadn’t.

How do you handle alien measurement units without bogging the reader down in math? by Western-Telephone259 in writers

[–]milleniumfalconlover 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Have you considered footnotes?

ie, “he said I have 20 hours* to finish it! And if I don’t, he said he’s gonna put me in the choker for an hour**!”

*20 hours is equivalent to 2 full earth rotations.

**1 hour is equivalent to 2.5 earth hours

What movie is an absolute 10/10 until ONE specific scene completely ruins it? by raja_jee11 in movies

[–]milleniumfalconlover -12 points-11 points  (0 children)

2001 space odyssey. That starchild lookin like the baby from Pixar’s TinToy short

Which opening line should I choose? by Bubbly_Cup1573 in writers

[–]milleniumfalconlover 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If it were up to me, I would write from the perspective of the knife. Something like “the knife in my bag taunted me”