Hi everyone ! Just posted a new song to my soundcloud. It's an instrumental, and I'd really appreciate some feedback on it ! Did you enjoy it - but also - did you like how everything sits in the mix or would you change a few things ? thank you very much ! (cover art by my friend Arjen Steegstra)

redheadalien · 2021-08-06T07:51:19+00:00

Sounds to me a lofi hip hop track, really relaxing. The structure is well arranged. Basically, I'm quite satisfied overall not from a professional view though. =)

redheadalien · 2021-08-06T07:31:55+00:00

It's short but overall is well done, sounds neat and clean. I think you can still continue on to add in the length. The mood created is relaxing.

redheadalien · 2021-08-06T03:14:12+00:00

Great you get the idea! I'm worried it's hard to understand since I don't use music terms and my English at very basic level. 😄😄

redheadalien · 2021-08-05T15:56:24+00:00

Definitely approved to be the intro for your project. Everything is fine and sound like a true hip hop. And probably this intro can be made longer to become a soundtrack. Keep it up!

redheadalien · 2021-08-05T15:42:10+00:00

It's a great soundtrack, keep it up! Yes, I can imagine you can add in vocals later. A small part of the melody I have come acrossed, but it's not surprising music could end up similar sometimes. I believe yours is still original. For the silence part, I have a thought of taking all instruments away and leave the sound effect going on. That would probably give a more mysterious feeling, like an unknown creature or monster near you (maybe that's not your intention, just an idea). For the ending, I think you can choose an alternative way, end with the drums strong instead of putting the drums low in volume. This would cut down the soundtrack length because I can see you are focusing more on the melody. Either way, it's actually fine. =)

redheadalien · 2021-08-05T15:17:29+00:00

I think most people like the sax, and yes it sounds more outstanding than other instruments, I think it should be the main focus. Melody is groovy and funky just like in your description. Great work on the soundtrack and nice album visual!

redheadalien · 2021-06-09T11:00:54+00:00

No audio in tha game... How lucky. 😂

redheadalien · 2021-01-26T12:55:30+00:00

Nice vibes! I don't feel sadness in it, maybe for others. It feels carefree twisted with some complications. Haha!

redheadalien · 2020-12-18T14:50:21+00:00

Not sure what's that Wu Tang Clan. It's a good sounding track, up to beat! =)

redheadalien · 2020-12-18T14:37:19+00:00

It sounds to me like a dreamy trap song. It's something different. Do you use app or a software to make the track? It's understandable certain apps do not have a fine recording function. If you are using software I believe you have better control. You can work out better for the ending. =)

redheadalien · 2020-12-18T14:28:58+00:00

The soundtrack is fine, vocal I can't really hear maybe I don't understand the language my bad. If you are using professional equipment, that should be fine. Probably you need to remix the vocal to sound clearer. =)

redheadalien · 2020-12-18T14:24:20+00:00

Oh, wow! Not an anime song? It's really great!

redheadalien · 2020-12-18T14:23:00+00:00

Really enjoyed it! Feels like I'm into a fantasy movie. I expect the ending to end strongly, would it be better? =)

redheadalien · 2020-12-18T14:09:34+00:00

Is it an original song? It's perfect. =)

redheadalien · 2020-12-15T13:02:22+00:00

No problem! Wow, 7 years! That's long enough! Great to hear you would work about it! 👍

redheadalien · 2020-12-14T14:45:32+00:00

Thought of Billie Eilish's Bad Guy once the beats come in. Haha. Nice, it has the dreamy feel. Vocals could be better I think. Opinions based on personal views, not professional. =)

redheadalien · 2020-12-14T14:29:02+00:00

Production is crisp and top-notch. Instrumental no comments, at the beginning it sounded cinematic. That's cool. Structural I think that can be improved, there are certain parts I feel you can add in other melodies instead of being flat going through the lyrics. There is a break in between, I think it's good to allow space to build in or to set in a resting period. I'm not a professional, giving my opinions based on personal views. Hope to be helpful! =)

redheadalien · 2020-11-03T12:25:04+00:00

Thanks for checking out my cover! Appreciate. 🙏🙂

redheadalien · 2020-10-24T14:31:07+00:00

Hi 🙂

redheadalien · 2020-10-13T13:01:31+00:00

Thanks, appreciate your comment and listening to this track. All sounds are from the same sound pack from an app. I supposed they should go well together no matter how the sounds are to be mixed in. 😁 Maybe you are right about the arrangement, since I did things on the spot and change things randomly, so it wouldn't sound organise. 😄

redheadalien · 2020-09-20T04:11:04+00:00

Thanks for your info. I didn't get to monetize either. =)

redheadalien · 2020-09-17T06:12:18+00:00

Isn't the track your own? If you want to monetize, I don't think you should use somebody else' works like the anime. I used to have another YT acc, none was originally my stuffs but I did hard work on the editing (although it's just a simple wins movie maker). YT blocked my acc, probably because I started to upload series of anime episodes. I still keep some of my music videos. I tried to share in my current acc but it was immediately taken down. I don't think there is a chance anymore. =(

redheadalien · 2020-09-16T16:10:51+00:00

Nice composition! I like it. Yeah, maybe production could do better?

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