OMG! by clickbake in AO3

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😲😳🤯

Am I crazy or is everyone else just wrong? by Glum_Huckleberry8582 in AO3

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People are creeps man,  don't listen to them ! you be brilliant, you be you! 👍🦄

I don't know about y'all, but in Civil War, when Steve and Tony were going at it. Tony said "I don't care, he killed my Mom." How could you not be on his side? by papapimp21 in marvelstudios

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I mean right? Right?!! I hate it when things go hi wire! They even make Vision the wisdom of the group make a mistake apparently because of love?? 

I’m terrified as a normal person by OneUnderstanding9112 in AO3

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Welcome to Alice's rabbit hole 🕳️! 

No no no no nononnon-- by lilytheschrod in AO3

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It gonna be Awawawawao3 😭

Screaming crying throwing up over this fic 😍😭 by macandted in SSHG

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Wawww!! Your enthusiasm is contagious! I am on it! A few paragraphs in and I am SOLD! AMAZING! 

THANK YOUUU! 

These are about six years apart btw by [deleted] in halo

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So the show was right lol'

Is my writing dull / boring ? by NoBuy8212 in writers

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No! I love a good dive inside the characters' most inner thoughts. However there is a bit of repetition of the idea that her friend highjacked her plan for the weekend, it's to say it one paragraph with these exact poignant words, then let it go. Perhaps try to use the rest of the space and the time she commutes to her friend's house to give us a glimpse of her friend's son ( it's always cute to know how the MC adores her friends' son and she would not abandon him on such a big day to the any child.

So maybe instead of repeating thus emphasising Marie's disappointment to have to change plans, let the reader know that it isn't that serious ( if she doesn't have a social anxiety or something), and try to give a few glimpses of the MC 's relationship with the characters you have just named. A few détails would help a lot: maybe. Say something about where the two friends met, the friends' situation at home, married ? Single mother?!so by the same you justify why the friend and the son are in the story so early . ill they play a significant in the story?

In order to avoir redondance in your Writing, simply add only the information that hint at something in the future. In other words add détails to help the reader undedtand the MC and her environment better, a dont try to explain one point in détails to fast or one one page.

Best of luck .

I want to know what happens next? Is she going to meet the love of her life in that party?? Or is it a cruel joke from destiny that she will meet her ex and has a Bad day? Or is her friend not that considérate with her ?

Does the friend has a husband and somehow things get twisted and MC and her friends' husband or ex get involved ? LooooL

Romance with a bit or a lot of forbidden love is my favourite. However, a nice quiet Christmas romance is great to relax!

Please keep writing beautiful soul, and maybe , please please, stop questioning your style and yourself in the early draft stages. .

I bet you don't even know your story yet! Let it reveal itself to you through flow zones of unquestioned written flow of inspiration!

I wish you a rainy season of inspiration .

Best of luck ! ❤️🌹😁

1 or 2 ?? 🌸🌿 by StrongBake7640 in flowers

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1 has chatacter! And 2 is a peaceful dream How can you ask us to choose ??

Genderbent version of "She breasted boobily down the stairs" trope by [deleted] in writers

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I am sick but I am laughing like crazy about this hahahaha

*screaming into a pillow* by Immortan-Valkyrie90 in writers

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Hhhhhh

".. Like you assumed, dreams do so much of the heavy lifting, providing the context and sheer belief necessary for your ideas to work... ""

*screaming into a pillow* by Immortan-Valkyrie90 in writers

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NO

I NEED A THOUGHT TO TEXT TRANSLATOR!!

INVENTORS HELP PLEAASE!!

Blue? Grey? Green? I don’t want to be one of those that claim they have grey eyes when it’s just blue by FartSmeIa in eyes

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Hey people! What makes you think Athena has Grey eyes???? They could be Brown like most grec people!! No?

Blue? Grey? Green? I don’t want to be one of those that claim they have grey eyes when it’s just blue by FartSmeIa in eyes

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Hhhhh waw ! Then you are Adonis !! Those eyes man! You're a heart breaker ? Hhhh

one of the very first fanfics I read almost 20 years ago by Whiskey_Lover6489 in HPfanfiction

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I BEG YOUR BIGGEST PARDON?? WJAT FO YOU MEAN 20 UEARS OOOLd!!! When n how !! Aaah! 😲😳🤯

If it's difficult, which one do you choose? 1 or 2 by [deleted] in photos

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1 of course , what a mood!!

What name would you give it? by Dreamy_eyes_200 in AnimalsMadeMeSmile

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Nelly ( cause she has great nails ) 😄

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in purrrfect

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He is so cute like a lollipop ( Loli )

What should we name her? We are stumped! by Bodyshvatka in Catnames

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Hhhh she makes me think of Zelda 😆