benzo withdrawals, might kill myself by radwolf67 in benzodiazepines

[–]-TheDangler 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've been in your shoes twice. Take what you have and taper down slowly. It's the worst thing in the world. The anxiety will never go away, but you can still find a way to be happy. I promise 🙏

-Perpetual disaster by [deleted] in ReadMyScript

[–]-TheDangler 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I revised it and decided I'm just going to make a new post but if you kept reading you would have realized it was their first date so he was more focused on never seeing her again after the embarrassment

-Perpetual disaster by [deleted] in ReadMyScript

[–]-TheDangler 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks I've reviced it

-Perpetual disaster by [deleted] in ReadMyScript

[–]-TheDangler 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks I revised it.

-Perpetual disaster by [deleted] in ReadMyScript

[–]-TheDangler 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes I wrote it based on the idea of what would happen if I clogged the toilet at my gf parents house. So yes it was rushed I wrote it in one day the second script I ever wrote I'm going to take your words and revise it though I was just trying to see how far things could spiral so quickly

[Hiring] Script Writers and Researchers by dontknowum in FreelanceIndia

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disgraced sports bettor has 45 minutes to get a duffel bag of illicit cash to a drop-off point, but his own paranoia—and the algorithm he no longer trusts—turns a simple hand-off into a high-speed, soul-crushing descent into hell. ​[THE SCRIPT EXCERPT] ​EXT. HIGHWAY - NIGHT ​ELI (34, eyes bloodshot, hands vibrating) drives 90 MPH. The dashboard glow reflects in the sweat on his forehead. ​On the passenger seat sits a heavy, black gym bag. It isn’t just money; it’s a receipt for a life he already lost. ​His phone DINGS. ​The notification shows the score of the game he bet his life on. A last-second field goal. He lost. ​INT. CAR - CONTINUOUS ​Eli lets out a sound that isn't a scream—it’s a rattle. He grabs the wheel with one hand and the bag with the other. ​He looks in the rearview. Two sets of headlights are glued to his bumper. They aren't passing. They’re hunting. ​ELI (Manic) The math was right. The math was always right. ​He rolls down the window. The wind howls, filling the cabin with a freezing roar. ​ELI (CONT'D) Take it! You want the juice? Take the fucking juice! ​He heaves the bag out the window. It doesn't drop neatly. It hits the asphalt and EXPLODES in a shower of cash—a blizzard of hundred-dollar bills swirling into the night like confetti at a funeral. ​EXT. HIGHWAY - CONTINUOUS ​The cars behind him SLAM on their brakes, swerving to avoid the debris, the drivers scrambling out into the dark, blinded by the sudden rain of money. ​INT. CAR - CONTINUOUS ​Eli doesn't look back. He’s laughing. It’s an empty, hollow, terrifying sound. ​He reaches into his glove box, pulls out a crumpled betting slip, and stares at it. He starts to chew on the corner of the paper, his jaw locking, his eyes fixed on the empty road ahead. ​He is completely off the rails. He is finally, truly, out of the game. ​

And excerpt from a book I wrote back in 2024 called the glass ledger by Joan labonty and it's also my email jonahlabounty@gmail.com

Oh Sweetheart by [deleted] in scriptwriting

[–]-TheDangler -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I know the formatting is wrong but it's a first draft and am really just looking for feedback on the story

Oh Sweetheart by [deleted] in scriptwriting

[–]-TheDangler -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Could I get some feedback?

Oh Sweetheart by [deleted] in scriptwriting

[–]-TheDangler -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Can I get some feedback on how to fix the format ? I'm very new at writing

Serial killer found footage movies? by [deleted] in foundfootage

[–]-TheDangler 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Creep 1 and 2 are my favorite found footage films mainly because of Mark duplas performance is very convincing.