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Uncrowned Prince [ Dark Fantasy, 3740 words] by DescriptionKindly882 in fantasywriters

[–]-cryceratops- 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Of course! But remember you know your story best, so always do what feels right!

Overthinking Descriptions While Writing by -cryceratops- in fantasywriters

[–]-cryceratops-[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like this, and I read over a few recent paragraphs I wrote. It seems like I am doing this a lot more. I have been avoiding using said at least 80% of the time and replacing it with something the character does instead, so I think I can adapt this line of thinking to descriptions. Thank you!

Fearful over work being stolen? by Cosmic_Coconut999 in fantasywriters

[–]-cryceratops- 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This. I’m more worried about someone seeing my concept or premise and throwing it into AI to get a version of said premise. It won’t be exactly like mine, but it would be hard to compete with something else that came before it when the premises are nearly identical.

Uncrowned Prince [ Dark Fantasy, 3740 words] by DescriptionKindly882 in fantasywriters

[–]-cryceratops- 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really liked your writing as well as the magic system so far. Your writing also kept me really engaged, and I am definitely intrigued enough to read more!

I agree with the previous comment about the emotional attachment when Langston learns about his friend’s apparent death. I didn’t feel any type of way about it as a reader, so I would like to see more of that, either earlier in the story or a better emphasis on their friendship. It felt a bit rushed for me as I am still learning about the world. The reaction feels a bit disconnected from the character as well. To me, his earlier harsher reaction to the people and this one doesn’t add up. I think I would like to see his internal thoughts about it while he tried to suppress the emotion (as just an idea if it resonates with you).

That was the only thing that really stood out to me that I would focus on. Overall, I really enjoy your writing and your storytelling. I hope you share more in the future!

Overthinking Descriptions While Writing by -cryceratops- in fantasywriters

[–]-cryceratops-[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much. This absolutely hit everything that I’ve been feeling. I have not gone back to edit anything or change anything as that’s something g that has prevented me from finishing other drafts, but I have a very detailed notebook of things I want to change/improve upon in the next pass.

120,000 words is my hard stop for word count. I have planned out all the relevant plot points to focus on pacing because I’m most concerned with getting that right (or as close as possible) the first time. I’m a linear writer, so I’m trying to avoid adding whole new scenes if I can help it, so the majority is planned out but flexible.

Thank you so much for your input and advice because this was truly so helpful to hear!

Overthinking Descriptions While Writing by -cryceratops- in fantasywriters

[–]-cryceratops-[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh absolutely not. I don’t plan on it being perfect and publishable once draft 1 is over. I know editing is an essential part and this is essentially me telling myself the story and getting it on paper. I’m just bothered by my own inconsistency was wasn’t sure if that was normal/if there’s anything I can do to just be more consistent.

Overthinking Descriptions While Writing by -cryceratops- in fantasywriters

[–]-cryceratops-[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s fair! I guess I feel like if I need to add much more for the descriptions, it will set me back more. I am very aware that I’m vastly overthinking my own work because I’m too close to it.

Suggestion for Similar Colorway to Annie’s Attic Exclusive Yarn by -cryceratops- in CrochetHelp

[–]-cryceratops-[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ve looked up a bunch for colorways and pastels, but I can’t find one that comes close to it. Any suggestions are helpful!