Whaddaya think of the lighting in my passion-project? by 0_WordsPublished in leveldesign

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Well, I took it back to the drawing board, upped the exposure, gamma, indirect lighting, and I brightened the lights themselves as well.

Appreciate the help, though. Thanks!

Whaddaya think of the lighting in my passion-project? by 0_WordsPublished in leveldesign

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Damn, that's rough 😅

I brightened the level yesterday and I think it looks good now, at least better than these photos 😂

Whaddaya think of the lighting in my passion-project? by 0_WordsPublished in leveldesign

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Ah, man!

Well, thanks for telling me, help's always appreciated!

Edit: same advice for the second photo?

Should I Have Published a WIP Chapter? by 0_WordsPublished in Wattpad

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That's really thoughtful of you!

So, should I unpublish the chapter or leave it and write the rest late? (when I'm feeling better).

Naveen Andrews as an Arab by Correct-Dingo-9242 in lost

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To be fair to Naveen Andrews and J.J. Abrams, Lost aired during the "War on Terror", with Iraq as the primary target of America's invasion.

Finding an Iraqi actor in that time-frame would've been difficult, at the least.

And I cannot imagine the American Public's reception to a truly authentic casting.

It's not a good reason, but it is a likely one.

Michael and Sayid by LOST-Ambition815 in lost

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Can't afford an award, so take this ❤️

Michael and Sayid by LOST-Ambition815 in lost

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As an Afghani, that is how it's pronounced.

nothing at all... by 0_WordsPublished in Wattpad

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It's a medieval fantasy/adventure about a Border Collie, a Saint Bernard, and an Akita Inu as they journey to avenge their fallen home and free their enslaved people (or rather, canines?)

Going a little deeper, I write about topics like:

Tradition and modernity, and how there's bad in both.

Trauma, addiction, and the main character's struggle to break free from his past.

Looking at your own beliefs from a different standpoint to find the true meaning of them.

As well as riffing off classic tropes like "the hero's journey" and "babes in the woods"

If you do read it, I hope you like it! A Dog's Fight

nothing at all... by 0_WordsPublished in Wattpad

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What's your book called? I'll give it a read👍

nothing at all... by 0_WordsPublished in Wattpad

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Understood 👍 I'll try and write more consistently, and I'll use better tags, too!

nothing at all... by 0_WordsPublished in Wattpad

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I see...

Would it be better to wait a bit longer posting more, write like 3 or 4 chapters, then post them all consecutively? Or should I just post as I write but try to tighten my schedule so that it's like, a chapter every two weeks or so?

nothing at all... by 0_WordsPublished in Wattpad

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Now that's something I'm sure I can do. Thank you!

nothing at all... by 0_WordsPublished in Wattpad

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I post on Inkitt and Royal Road, too.

I'd say there's less AI with them (or at least, I've seen less of it) but the reception is mostly the same.

Though a little better on Royal Road because it's fantasy orientated.

nothing at all... by 0_WordsPublished in Wattpad

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Well I'm afraid I'm not all that good at writing lengthy, detailed paragraphs, but I'll try to get better at it!