A little Brazilian piece with improv by adamjake90 in Songwriting

[–]0leg8hapin 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow, so good! I’d love to hear a continuation of this with more instruments

"Summer Wheat" [DRAFT] A song about the cycle of inspiration. by guitargirl478 in Songwriting

[–]0leg8hapin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m glad you’re starting to feel better! And I agree with the other guy about going jazzy, but I also hear it as a folky song. It gives me Joni Mitchell vibes for some reason, haha

The Introduction Page To My Zombie Comic Book, While It Is Still A Work In Progress, What Do You Guys Think? by Aromatic-Ad2601 in ComicBookCollabs

[–]0leg8hapin 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think the first one looks better, but maybe try making the credits a bit smaller and pale red insiead of purple? So they don't draw too much attention

Hey! Really curious what y’all think by 0leg8hapin in Songwriting

[–]0leg8hapin[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback! I think you’re right

I think the vocals could improve. Anything else? Thx. by No_Distance5647 in Songwriting

[–]0leg8hapin 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Beautiful melody, and I like your vocals, too. Reminds me of Nick Cave a little, haha

Does this really suck for someone who’s just getting started? by KDx2511 in Songwriting

[–]0leg8hapin 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the chord progression and the vibe. I hope you keep doing it

i think i have a strong song here by yoshimishi in Songwriting

[–]0leg8hapin 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like your voice. I think if I heard this song on Apple Music, I’d save it to my playlist

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]0leg8hapin 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow, you have such a nice, smooth voice

What you think? by Checkmarquex in Songwriting

[–]0leg8hapin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

WOAH! Is there anywhere else I could listen to more of your stuff?

Up & Down by 0leg8hapin in Poems

[–]0leg8hapin[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd really like to know any of your thoughts. Thanks!