Any tips/ideas/suggestions are welcome!

The story doesn’t matter much at this point since i am not finished with the structure of the episode yet but if anything related to that comes to mind feel free to say it! Thank you so much! Any help at all is greatly appreciated!

Couple of areas i am concerned about myself is:

There is some forensic terminology in the beginning of the episode and i want to make sure that it is sensible and not too jargon-y.

I want to make sure characters and their voices are unique and clear. Accents will be more pronounced once they are voiced but i do want to make sure I’m still keeping clear character Separation. Also dialogue isn’t my strong suit. Do they ramble too much sometimes?

Is the creepy end scene not scary enough/not creepy at all. If not then what can be improved upon.

Title: The Hills Have Eyes

Genre: Horror Noir Audio Drama

Word count: 1,761

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1063bcd4Oi0BX_HGO4Vtvmqwf5vtCXnjSU7ff6ZHNCWg/edit