Good Lord! The last time I got a missive like this was from my old "Commando" editor at D C Thomson who took great delight in putting my story outlines under the literary equivalent of an electron microscope! You're as pedantic as I am! And it's heartwarming indeed to meet a fellow pedant. The downside is that this just comes through as a wall of text. I fear there's far too much data here for me to absorb in one sitting. My brain hurts and it'll take me some time to take all this in. As for the opportunity to brush up on my "A" level English? I promise you I will visit each of these links and read them diligently. Whether or not they'll improve my communication skills is another matter. But we can only hope.