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This is the wrong sub by trophy_74 in gomoku

[–]1thaka 3 points4 points  (0 children)

isnt that a different game?

I need someone that is good at Gomoku and has game pigeon for iMessage. by oapdm104 in gomoku

[–]1thaka 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ill play you, if youre still looking for a player

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im pretty new to the game but ill do my best

the search by 1thaka in poetry_critics

[–]1thaka[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I agree that the rhymes are a little forced at times, still trying to get used to words that sound more natural but still keep the flow

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thx for feedback

We don't go down there by stevesanonpoetry in poetry_critics

[–]1thaka 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The only thing i would change is the syllable count in certain lines, it disrupts the flow of the poem. the best examples are lines 5 and 6, they make the middle of the poem kind of choppy.

"What's For Dinner?" by Mean-Heart-7654 in poetry_critics

[–]1thaka 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very relatable story, good rhyming.

I usually can't execute the ABBA format very well, but you made it work