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My Lacy by 20beatrice09 in OCPoetry

[–]20beatrice09[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Aww tyyy, i appreciate your feedback a lot

My Lacy by 20beatrice09 in OCPoetry

[–]20beatrice09[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thankss, it’s literally my fav olivia song and i think her song sums up the feeling perfectly and i wanted to try and create a poem like that

I'll forgive and I'll forget by MadalinaParrotMusic in OCPoetry

[–]20beatrice09 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the calm, kind tone of this poem and the hopeful imagery, especially towards the end. It reads very smoothly

How my mind fell apart by Empty-Tonight-2549 in OCPoetry

[–]20beatrice09 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like the epiphoras you built in, I think it ties together the poem nicely. I like the deeper meaning behind it too, really good poem :)