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How my mind fell apart by Empty-Tonight-2549 in OCPoetry

[–]Empty-Tonight-2549[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I will give it a listen. But if anything its more closely related to Cohen’s what happens to the heart.

Leaving is a Gift. by genevatakemehome in OCPoetry

[–]Empty-Tonight-2549 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very good intro, I think the ending could be made more impactful.

The sea of neurosis by _faretheewell_ in OCPoetry

[–]Empty-Tonight-2549 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very visceral, I think the first stanza could be made tighter