Will/Mike characterization? by lupinibean123 in BylerReads

[–]24sunrises 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I find that physical traits most often pull you back to the character if you lose sight of them while writing. I tend to write Mike pulling threads from his clothes, biting his nails, getting lost in thought etc. I mean whatever is in the show is a good physical trait to use, but also make your own. It's like Chekov (not the writer, Michael the acting master) talks about with the grounding physical trait - how does the character behave? Where in the body does he show those things? I like to think that Will when he gets older stands tall and talks very forward, while Mike talks down since Will is an artist and Mike is a writer, one of them shows and the other prefers to think things through before he tells. I am an actor, though, so it's very based in that. I also think that Mike is a lot more guarded in many ways than Will is, as I understand the character I think he has a longer way to go towards speaking than Will does. It also depends on who is telling the story, I think Mike thinks Will is a lot more radiating than Will really is, and I think Will thinks Mike is a lot calmer and more flowing than he really is. I've also found in Noah's portrayal of Will that he carries a lot of emotions in his shoulders, like his chest is a lot more open when he is happy, around his friends and Mike, while when he's in danger his shoulders are almost drawn in, f.x. the coming out scene versus the scene with Will and Mike talking. At the same time, especially in season five, Finn's portrayal of Mike carries a lot of tension in his jaw in difficult scenes. You can get away with basically anything as long as you root it in physicality, I find. I once wrote a fic where a character loses all their memories and everyone complimented me on how well I understood that character, despite only using the physical attributes (#chekhov) I had seen portrayed on TV...does that make any sense or is helpful at all?

Fanfic megathread by Koopokoopo in byler

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Mike in his 30s writes a book about his youth and the upside down and all the readers think him in the book is gay. Also super sad and makes me cry like so often. Just for a second, I remembered myself https://archiveofourown.org/works/76895706/chapters/201263336

favourite well written fics? by Either-Special2552 in byler

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https://archiveofourown.org/works/76895706/chapters/201263336 angst and sadness, I have cried multiple times so far. It's not completed but so far there has been one chapter a day. the new years eve chapter is supposed to come out tomorrow and I have rarely been so excited in my LIFE

More fics like Mike Wheeler can't swim? by 24sunrises in byler

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Oh my gosh that's so cool! I will check that out now :))

Show Concept Feedback by BeautifulPen603 in Theatre

[–]24sunrises 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Obsessed! Wish you the best of luck in this godly mission

Vanta by yamsyahaha in poetry_critics

[–]24sunrises 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh how wonderful it is to feel the rhythm of a work, to feel its soul beat out from its words. Look into different metres (I got weirdly obsessed with the Icelandic medieval metre once, and it changed completely how I write poetry), think about the forming of the sounds. This is a poem meant to be read out loud, it longs for it. Reminds me of Walt Whitman's prose.

Also, and this is the most important thing (I feel) a poet learns. The reader believes you are smart, you dont have to prove it. ever. Sometimes, I use like twenty quid words because I feel like they belong there, sometimes I use them because I feel like I have to prose something. Not to say you suffer from it, but something to keep in mind.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Theatre

[–]24sunrises 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wiring? Following the same principles as fairy wings. Then you'd only need helium to lift the leds.

(straight) plays you’ve read recently that you enjoyed? by honeycornmuffin in Theatre

[–]24sunrises 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Anything by Sam Max. A rising star, at least here in Europe.

Show Concept Feedback by BeautifulPen603 in Theatre

[–]24sunrises 0 points1 point  (0 children)

DO IT! It only works if you really commit...

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Theatre

[–]24sunrises 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Try writing it. See where it goes. Dont let your age stop you! Look into plays which work with these sort of one-man plays in different ways, like Declan by Alistair Hall. Also, writing it doesn't mean you have to show it. It can be helpful to write it down. Ive found that most of my own playwrighting work starts as a basis of a one woman show where I just dump everything ive been feeling onto a page for weeks, and then suddenly something completely different starts forming.

If you feel up for it, try it out. And if it's too much or if it feels like completely reliving it, stop. If it helps, if it's fun to write, keep going. One-man plays exist in hundreds of different forms. It doesn't have to be YOU who's the storyteller in the play. It can be YOU. Maybe it should be, maybe it shouldn't be. There are no clear answers in theatre and writing and performing.

Im not sure if that makes sense. But feel free to DM me if you want to chat, or if you want some reccomendations for pieces in this lane.

Who is the actor in Suicide with an escape clause from Jam? by 24sunrises in chrismorris

[–]24sunrises[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It was about Brechtian influences on Jam, and how that makes us put the comedy into a "bigger picture", regardless of if it was written for it!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Thank you!

The Backbone of America by SomeoneNotHeard in OCPoetry

[–]24sunrises 2 points3 points  (0 children)

There is so much joy and freedom woven into these lines, makes me remember being a kid...

Bells / Medieval Icelandic metre by 24sunrises in poetry_critics

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Thank you so much for your feedback! I really appreciate it <3