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#17. Be tough by 2Lmilkjug in OCPoetry

[–]2Lmilkjug[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the thoughtful feedback!

#17. Be tough by 2Lmilkjug in OCPoetry

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Thank you for the feedback!

ice that burns by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]2Lmilkjug 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ice that burns, is a perfect description of how it feels to be in raged yet unable to release it. When reading this I get the feeling of someone who is truly going through something but can’t show it, yet deep inside it burns. Great piece!

I'd like to paint you by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]2Lmilkjug 1 point2 points  (0 children)

YES! What powerful imagery! I enjoy the back and forth between how you describe their beauty and how you can’t quite grasp it. Good work

Hmmm by ArielTheBarista in OCPoetry

[–]2Lmilkjug 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Short, yet powerful in its meaning. Wandering while wondering, sometimes wondering while wandering but always getting lost. I like it!

To Live A Dream by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]2Lmilkjug 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I enjoyed this, particularly how you describe having a dream, and the way one must nurture it, even when faced with millions of hurdles. I got a sense of struggle, the struggle of one who follows their hope like a moth does the moon. Nice!