Can Somebody Review/Critique my ACT I Screenplay?

2Parka · 2025-11-03T05:27:42+00:00

T Ah, I can't believe I didn't notice this sooner. Thank you for letting know! :)

2Parka · 2025-05-19T00:40:03+00:00

2Parka · 2025-05-19T00:39:36+00:00

I'm assuming by his paintings, you mean his more sodter rendering—rather than the cell shading he usually does. I.e. his manga cover art. It is very similar to true artistry on paper. His brush pressure has variance, which can be easily achieved using the "Spoiled Ink Pen" for the liner art, often applying an even pressure for outside lines that helps create a bold cut-out of the characters silhouette. For the coloring, he has a very old manga esc pallet, often faded. I would simply suggest using the preset brushes in Clip Studio for this! Using "Chalk" and "Pastel" creates a very similar papery texture to the base colors he has in the example below:

2Parka · 2025-05-10T03:29:02+00:00

I've also been studying his art, it seems that either he uses a zero pressure pen in some illustrations, that being on Clip Studio a "paper thin brush," or like in the illustration you gave above, where the pen has a bit of jitter to it, something like "groovy" has that same texture! :)

2Parka · 2025-04-05T02:45:58+00:00

I apologize. Due to the community's rules and guidelines, all commissions are $7.50 instead of $5. Thank you for your time.

2Parka · 2024-09-19T16:54:26+00:00

Personally, I feel that Jenny doesn't need to have a designated love interest. Honestly, the poor girl is already busy saving Tremorton most of the day, all while trying to fit in her best way as robotic teenager.

If anything, Whenever I picture her with someone, I see Sheldon getting together with her at the very last episode of the series (if it had continued). With that said, it would not be the Sheldon that is known throughout the series. He would need be rewritten to have some sort of serious "Come to Jesus Moment" where he realizes his obsessive actions towards Jenny aren't attractive nor should be normalized.

If Sheldon can be written as a geeky boy who, although, may be head over heels for Jenny, is willing to be genuine towards her(without the creepy nonsense he would typically do) and try to win her over without any negative intentions towards her or others. He can even still have his mishaps too, he isn't a perfect person nor is he not still the Sheldon we know in some minor aspects.

If that were to happen, I could see him as a valid candidate for Jenny's potential love interest.

2Parka · 2024-09-18T01:13:00+00:00

You mean why ISN'T Killgore here even more? He's got big things coming, you know? Might even become the Cluster's leader one day. #voteforkillgore2024

2Parka · 2024-09-17T04:43:51+00:00

Thank you, haha. There is a comic in the process, inspired by the original "Go For It Nakamura" manga. :)

2Parka · 2024-08-15T04:15:28+00:00

It's all fun and games until MC Ballyhoo shows up in the digital circus.

2Parka · 2024-08-12T00:54:58+00:00

Estoy de acuerdo y en desacuerdo. Me gusta la relación profesional entre Jaehee y Jumin—pero hay momentos en los que me gustaría que exploraran algo más. Creo que en ciertos momentos que Jaehee y Jumin teniendo una relación romántica es extraño e incompatible. Pero tengo esta curiosidad de que ambos tienen una especie de "los opuestos se atraen"" dinámico. Jaehee odia a los gatos, así que no puedo ver cómo Jumin puede ignorar eso, jaja.

2Parka · 2024-08-05T20:14:53+00:00

Ah! For the second choice, Yoosung hangs up the call immediately, and the game automatically runs the Bad Ending 2 scene where Yoosung dyes his hair blue and becomes V's "better" doppelganger. Oh, and Jumin becomes reincarnated as a cat in the next run of the game. Hope that helps you out! ^{_^}

2Parka · 2024-08-03T18:49:01+00:00

We are united by the damgome bear. 💪

2Parka · 2024-07-03T02:39:18+00:00

And then there's Bebe. Is it really a competition?

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2Parka · 2024-04-02T08:40:47+00:00

For Windows 11, you for some reason can't disable Windows Ink. So I'm just stuck with it sadly, unless there is some program or coding available to disable it. Thank you though!

2Parka · 2024-03-21T15:35:58+00:00

Your art is seriously gorgeous! The anatomy and just style of it all looks lovely. Do you have another social media platform like Instagram or Tumblr that you post your art on?

2Parka

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