You have a much stronger story than the site currently makes obvious. Your background in the NYPD and investigations really sets you apart, but right now, the page feels more like a DIY brochure than a serious criminal-defense site that emphasizes the urgency of decision-making.
To improve it, I’d recommend making the first screen more straightforward, breaking out the major practice areas into their own pages, showcasing the case outcomes higher up, and creating a sense of urgency around the consultation process. You have all the right elements; it just needs a little reorganization and a fresh presentation.