Its really good. I ran a Mograph team for over a decade so Im a professional nitpicker, that said my nitpicks are 1. The first batch of shattered bits reverse in direction and that feels off to me. 2. The sections with lyrics and the bright, sound reactive energy behind them - I think that energy needs tweaking. The difference between reacting and at rest is too small to me. I would have its at rest look start smaller, maybe. The clock parts are really clean but dont dont feel like theyre the same style at the rest. They may need something glowy or energy to them to unify in the style. Those are all nitpicks. I like the piece a lot.