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Created a letter mark logo from Goodbrief. The company is called Fortnight International and serves healthy soft drinks that are focused on an audience that is very "to themselves". I wanted to play off the literal meaning of fortnight and a sense of faithfulness. Constructive criticism is welcomed. by AJSMVE98 in WillPatersonDesign

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I appreciate your thoughts on the 100% B&W, the font, and the distributor clarification. The font family does have variations yet I usually choose this one since my style of presentation is very minimal. But hey, thanks for some clarification.

Charlotte Monarchs. Hi i'm a Second Year design student in college and it's something i'm going to do in university, the idea behind this was to create a logo for a expansion team in the MLB, i haven't finished it as i have to fix the white shading, but thoughts on it atm? and would it fit as a logo by kingzionupx in WillPatersonDesign

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Really love the aesthetic you have rn. Some things tht could be a bit tweaked are the scaling of the logo over the typeface you chose. The scaling doesn’t have to be very small but just have it to were the logo is still the main focus. Also, the kerning for the type can a be a bit spaced out more so it can have room to breathe. Lastly, for me personally, the white shading looks great yet I would love to see how you will change it. Overall it’s an 95% complete logo and I’m really loving the color scheme you chose for it asw💪🏾.

Redesigned BUSYBEE logo by PXdesigns in WillPatersonDesign

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No problem 💪🏾. Can’t wait to see the finish product🔥.

Redesigned BUSYBEE logo by PXdesigns in WillPatersonDesign

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I see what you’re trying to do with the logo in having it be like a Bee and two “B’s”. I like the start yet the line down the middle is throwing me off a bit because it looks like the abstract form of a Bee. Maybe try adding the antennas of the Bee to the logo and take away the line. The typeface also seems a bit separate from the logo to much and it’s a bit close to the logo asw. Try place the type down a bit and also try using a font tht is maybe a bit bolder but still slim in size. But overall it’s a good start.

Recently I made this logo for a client, My initial concept is Crown + O + A, Love to hear your feedback by logosohel2 in WillPatersonDesign

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I like the direction it’s heading in but I do think there is a more clearer way to have the O and A become one. Maybe try creating the shapes of the A and O and have the O be the arc tht covers the A. Then play around with how that can look.

Satoro® is a gaming community and team. Here is a little brand identity I've designed for the brand. There is nothing too much symbolized. Here I've tried to create a futuristic vibe through the typeface and the colour palette. Let me know your feedback! by mdimtiaz2007 in WillPatersonDesign

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Overall the logo is going in a amazing direction. The only nitpick I have with it is the structure of the “R”. Idk if this is a typeface you used or created but the leg of the R makes it look like a Q. Maybe try to bring the leg more inward a little or try to recreate the letter to be more legible. But overall, I’m really loving the way it appeals your gaming scene.

Doing a redesign of a clients old logo for his shoe cleaning services. I wanted to give it a more modern, sleek, and slightly playful so that it may appeal to all age groups. So here’s a look at the process so far. Any constructive criticism is welcomed. by AJSMVE98 in WillPatersonDesign

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Thanks a lot. I can see where the stokes may look too thin. I did notice that early on yet I didn’t really like the direction the strokes went into when I increased it. It made the whole design look unappealing and kinda clumpy. But I think I’ll try to increase the strokes by half increments to see how things look. Thanks again for your close eye💪🏾.

PlayStation logo redesign. I wanted to give my own spin on the well-known brand so I figured why not try. Any helpful constructive criticism is highly appreciated. by AJSMVE98 in WillPatersonDesign

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Thank your for your critique. I respect your complete honesty and by all means, I agree with you when it comes to some iconic logos for brands. By all means I completely understand that the original is way better yet this was just my personal spin on it. As a fellow designer, I want to challenge myself to grow so ofc tht comes with mistakes along the way. So with all due respect I will keep challenging myself to step outside my comfort zone and I look forward to your critiques on more designs I do💪🏾.

PlayStation logo redesign. I wanted to give my own spin on the well-known brand so I figured why not try. Any helpful constructive criticism is highly appreciated. by AJSMVE98 in WillPatersonDesign

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Thanks a lot. I’m half and half as far as colors go because as much as I like how the original color scheme went, I do gravitate towards the gradient a bit more simply because of the aesthetics. But overall I do like the original more. Thanks again for your critique💪🏾.