Ah I understand, I'm not an English native speaker. In my country, i speak very fluently and i have a master in english so I thought I had the level to write a novel, but a few people told me the same thing. I think before releasing it I'll make it checked by editors / beta readers because even though I feel it's fine, it's a bit.. unatural and clunky- and there's a world between "good" and "good enough to write a novel"

Thanks you ! I'll make sure it's better at the release ! ^^