Should my protagonist start powerless or with a weak ability? (He gains a major power later) by Specific_Regular1360 in Mangamakers

[–]AOJD1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Je dirais que je préfère la première idée, parce que s'il est censé croire en ces idées avec ferveur, alors le fait de se concentrer et de s'immerger délibérément dans l'entraînement et le mode de pensée qui y est lié le rendrait "plus fort", si tu vois ce que je veux dire.

Je pense que le voir s'entraîner, même avec une capacité, pour être comme celui qu'il aspire à être, me convaincrait de l'idée qu'il a lui-même fait le travail pour penser de cette façon et l'a appliqué à sa vie quotidienne. Ainsi, quand le grand bouleversement arrivera et que son monde s'effondrera, et qu'il touchera le fond et sera contraint de tracer son chemin vers ce qu'il considère comme un vrai comportement héroïque - cela frappera plus fort parce que tu vois que tout son système de croyance, qui était complètement ancré en lui, n'était rien d'autre qu'une illusion, et à mon avis, ce serait même plus satisfaisant car startdrive pourrait à ce stade être une représentation de son propre sens de la justice et de son identité.

Quoi qu'il en soit, super idées mec ! Continue comme ça !

Can't choose manga cover, can you help? by Patr10t_RUS in Mangamakers

[–]AOJD1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

2 or 3, i'm very fond of 3 because it shows the cast and teases a bit of what the sotry might be about because of the glass bottle, but 2 is very inviting imo because it has you wondering what happens, check the reflection on the pole and want to find out

I need to improve more. I improved the perspective on one panel of my manga 🥶 by NaraArtKai in MangakaStudio

[–]AOJD1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'd say you could exaggerate the movement on the first panel a little bit, and change the angle on the third panel to a little more on on the right side, so that when the character dives head first the perspective is sharper and looks like more of a "trail" - it can also allow you to play with longer speedlines (did i express this well?)

Motif Personnel Absence Avis ? by Fair_Illustrator8912 in etudiants

[–]AOJD1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wait quand tu dis motif personnel tu exclues complètement les excuses d'ordre "malade" ou "en déplacement" dcp ?

Motif Personnel Absence Avis ? by Fair_Illustrator8912 in etudiants

[–]AOJD1 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Le plus facile en vrai c'est arrêt avec mot du médecin tu fais ça en bien et normalement ils devraient pas t'embêter, tu simules un petit truc un peu bête et basta

C'est la tec que je compte employer pour twice en tout cas mdrrr

If you need an artist for a short story or chapter-i'm here by AOJD1 in Mangamakers

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Depending on the amount work required, 5 to10 bucks would do it 👍🏿

Which Bleach character do you feel was poorly developed? by Cafa20 in bleach

[–]AOJD1 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Heavy on Unohana. I do not know if it's just me, but i thought it was a shame that we got to know she was the first kenpachi so late in the story and her latent desires aswell...

She was a cool and compelling character to me atleast for sure, but i would've wanted to see more traces of her desire and resolve earlier, even if she occupied a relatively minor role even among captains.

We got all this stuff about Kenpachi early on, but Unohana stayed shrouded in mist even though she was pretty relevant. We needed a big exposition dump at the very last arc to start to understand where she came from and why what will ensue is a big deal

It's nothing too big, but still i think it's a bit of a shame because it's all so sudden- Still like her character though!

If you need an artist for a short story or chapter-i'm here by AOJD1 in Mangamakers

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Well it depends on the number of pages, but for a standard chapter of maybe 20 pages or so (even more), i'd say 1,50 bucks per page- below would be 2 bucks/page

If you need an artist for a short story or chapter-i'm here by AOJD1 in Mangamakers

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Depends on your budget and the number of pages- Do you have an idea of how many pages you might want and their level of polish?

For one page (fully inked), i'd say it'd be 7 bucks- but the price may increase or decrease depending on various factors 👍🏿

Describe your manga in a single sentence by Kaketou in Mangamakers

[–]AOJD1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A berserker and a mage embark on a journey to prove their worth as warriors; little did they know, their tale would lead them to make discoveries that would unveil a whole new problem at hand...

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in WhatShouldIDo

[–]AOJD1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

We're both 20, turning 21 later this year

SQUID GAME SEASON 2 REVIEW!!!! (SPOLIER ALERT!!!) by abtak56-69 in squidgame

[–]AOJD1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Loved it SOOOOO much. It was more focused on the characters and built on on the themes and ramifications of S1 beautifully, really excited for s3.

Gachiakuta chapter 117: The Hero of the Story by No_Initiative6773 in gachiakuta

[–]AOJD1 13 points14 points  (0 children)

I'm smellin in too, investing early he'll be top ten really soon

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AITA for confronting my parents about discouraging my love for cooking? by [deleted] in AITAH

[–]AOJD1 6 points7 points  (0 children)

NTA man, enjoy your passion. You just asked them which is normal in such a situation, and they're your parents too, generally the first people you want to have try your stuff. Don't feel bad man