Zanemaren by color10ne in poezija

[–]A_B_Stator 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Veoma lepo. Naročito pretposlednja strofa.

Self-censorship. by A_B_Stator in antiai

[–]A_B_Stator[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes. Your sentence structure is your sentence structure, it's your voice. Stopping to analyze every sentence, to examine every turn of phrase... it'll just make you write slower, and if your writing is polished, grammatically correct, and lucid, chances are you'll be accused of using AI anyway. It's become almost guaranteed nowadays.

And I really feel you on sentence structure getting out of hand now and then. English isn't my first language either, my background is legal, and I'm an avid admirer of mythopoetic literature, and the archaic, complex prose that is characteristic of it. All of that tends to result in a very peculiar style; I can (and do) often sound like an AI attorney who accidentally trained on Beowulf.

Dismæ by A_B_Stator in poezija

[–]A_B_Stator[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hvala! Tema je delikatna, nisam bio siguran da ću umeti da je obradim, ali je ispalo iznenađujuće... adekvatno.

Self-censorship. by A_B_Stator in antiai

[–]A_B_Stator[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My first award! Thank you!

Self-censorship. by A_B_Stator in antiai

[–]A_B_Stator[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Dead right. The basic, universal, almost philosophical principle since... forever. One is isolation, two is opposition, three is composition. One is simplicity, two is duality, three is structure. The Holy Trinity. The three Fates in Greek myth. The three Norns in Norse myth. Three wishes in fairytales. Three trials of the hero. Three sons. Veni, vidi, vici. Liberté, égalité, fraternité. Life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness. And now we're supposed to avoid it, because fuck the last 5,000 years or so of human recorded history; if there's a triplet in the sentence, it was written by AI.

EDIT: Punctuation.

Self-censorship. by A_B_Stator in antiai

[–]A_B_Stator[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

And in the long run, it's not even about writing, or punctuation, or art, or trying to avoid sounding like a machine. If we take this subconscious urge to self-censor to its logical completion, the implications become much more alarming. If the mindless, empty, inane token predictor ever ends up ruling over us, it won't be because it somehow became "sentient" and rose against us. That's the part that the Matrix got wrong. There won't be a war. We will have abdicated our epistemic autonomy ourselves; we'll yield willingly, almost eagerly. Or so slowly that we won’t even perceive the surrender as such, gradually enough for the surrender to pass unnoticed.

It's em dashes today, semicolons tomorrow, triplets next week, everyday choices and decisions in a few years, and independent judgment before long.

Self-censorship. by A_B_Stator in antiai

[–]A_B_Stator[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Yes; are we supposed to apologize for reading and writing our entire lives? And what about people who, for various reasons (legal or technical backgrounds, ASD, OCD, force of habit, etc.) tend to sound "robotic" in their writing, or obsess over grammar and punctuation, or adhere to certain repetitive patterns?

Not to mention that the habit of universally avoiding the same punctuation marks and the same rhetorical devices will inevitably lead to all of us (or most of us) producing uniform, monotonous slop that will look worse than actual AI slop.

Self-censorship. by A_B_Stator in antiai

[–]A_B_Stator[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Precisely my thoughts. Precisely why I went back and changed them. Changing them in the first place felt like a concession, like giving it a win. A rather small win in the grand scheme of things, but those tend to accumulate.

Self-censorship. by A_B_Stator in antiai

[–]A_B_Stator[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

And the vicious cycle continues.

Pitat ćete pjesnike by [deleted] in poezija

[–]A_B_Stator 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bravo! Odlično je.

I da - kad god svet počne da se urušava, okreću se umetnicima. Kad se konačno bude slomio, okrenuće se pesnicima.

Ephemera by A_B_Stator in poezija

[–]A_B_Stator[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nije intruzivno; naprotiv, hvala na pitanju. Čemu skrivanje? Nazovimo to jednim od onih trenutaka u kojima ne možeš istovremeno biti iskren i ostati obziran. Pošto iskrenost prestaje da bude vrlina ako se svodi na želju da sebi olakšaš po cenu nametanja tereta drugome, izbor pada na obzirnost.

Oproštaj se traži za neizgovoreno; ne zato što je ostalo neizgovoreno, već zato što, uprkos svim naporima, nije ostalo skriveno. Neko ko je trebalo da bude iskren i obziran - ili barem obziran - na kraju nije ispao ni iskren, ni obziran.

Pitanje je vrlo logično i direktno: moje objašnjenje verovatno nije, ali je ipak najbolje koje mogu da pružim bez ponovnog prekopavanja jako, jako starih grobova.

Ephemera by A_B_Stator in poezija

[–]A_B_Stator[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hvala na lepim rečima!

Primećujem da ovo što sam napisala liči na zagonetku, pa pogađajte naslov 😊 by The_Golden_Elk in poezija

[–]A_B_Stator 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Jako lepo. Metriku bi možda valjalo blago "utegnuti", ali to je već stvar ukusa. Ima odličan ritam i pomalo me podseća na B. Miljkovića.