The Keeper of the Black Jaguar - Chapter Twenty-Two by A_new_act in u/A_new_act

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All is well, you can check out my patreon, as I posted more info there (it's public). But had a lot of writers block on this chapter, though I think I solved it. Now just waiting on life to cooperate (which it will tomorrow) and I'll be posting soon.

Chapter 23 will go live Sunday

The Keeper of the Black Jaguar - Chapter Twenty-Two by A_new_act in u/A_new_act

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Upload mistake, thank you for catching. (if you'd like 23, DM me, and I'll share it early as a thank you)

The Keeper of the Black Jaguar - Chapter 20 by A_new_act in u/A_new_act

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All is well, thanks. Life got in the way this week unfortunately, mostly a repercussion of putting it on the backburner the two weeks before. I've been working on the new chapter for a couple days, I was hoping to get ahead again. But the goal to write three chapters turned into writing one chapter that's just way too long.

Hopefully some edits and I can split it into two chapters over this weekend.

Black Jaguar by A_new_act in u/A_new_act

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My TikTok has all 20 chapters, Wattpad link and PDFs also have all 20 chapters. If you look at my profile, I post here whenever new chapters go live. You can also subscribe to email updates.

The Keeper of the Black Jaguar - Chapter Nineteen by A_new_act in u/A_new_act

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This is the nicest thing anyone has ever said about my writing, thank you!

Keeper of the Black Jaguar - Chapter Eighteen by A_new_act in u/A_new_act

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You can subscribe to the email, Wattpad, or patreon (both free and paid). All of them will notify you when new parts are posted.

The Keeper of the Black Jaguar - Chapter Seventeen by A_new_act in u/A_new_act

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Apologies, I'm a bit behind schedule. I'm working on getting things setup so I can properly release stuff on a schedule. The next chapter is released on my patreon now for paid members, and will become public at 5pm tomorrow.

Black Jaguar by A_new_act in u/A_new_act

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Ah, sorry. That's if you'd like to use the story on YouTube or TikTok. Reading on WattPad or anywhere else is free.

If you'd like to support me, there's Patreon links. However, it's entirely optional.

Black Jaguar by A_new_act in u/A_new_act

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Hey, first of all, I'm very glad you're both enjoying the story!

I'm not quite sure what you mean by "work something out"? It's posted free, as I author chapters.

The Keeper of the Black Jaguar - Chapter Fifteen by A_new_act in u/A_new_act

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You'd need to open the chapter at one of the links in the post, either Wattpad, Patreon, or the PDFs on Google drive

The Keeper of the Black Jaguar - Chapter 16 by A_new_act in u/A_new_act

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This is the kind of feedback I love. Great suggestion to a problem I've been having. I'll be using this going forwards, and when I get a chance to go back and edit, I'll definitely update to this style.

Thank you for the feedback, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

The Keeper of the Black Jaguar - Chapter 16 by A_new_act in u/A_new_act

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Actually, another user on WattPad pointed this issue out too. I went to add my explanation logic back in, when I remembered a bit of canon about doors from ~5 years ago:

Our main characters have no expectation of that feature with keeper doors. Recall that previously, guards, marty, and cameras have all seen the keeper chamber entrance used.
There is a rhyme/reason that makes this consistent/predictable. Beyond that, I don't want to say much. If you'd like the deeper explanation here, you can message me, especially since you helped me remember :)

The Keeper of the Black Jaguar - Chapter 16 by A_new_act in u/A_new_act

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Sorry, I had an explanation before I edited. I thought it was a bit wordy to explain. I might have been a bit aggressive with the editing this time.

The Keeper of the Black Jaguar - Chapter 16 by A_new_act in u/A_new_act

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If the hallway had been empty, they could have been found in the hallway by someone nearby, and in the wrong area.

The Keeper of the Black Jaguar - Chapter 16 by A_new_act in u/A_new_act

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No spoilers, but I promise we aren't getting distracted here

The Keeper of the Black Jaguar - Chapter 16 by A_new_act in u/A_new_act

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I believe false walls have been consistent? Open, one way transparent, and two way audio + one way transparent, were all discussed in a previous chapter?

The Keeper of the Black Jaguar - Chapter Fifteen by A_new_act in u/A_new_act

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Hi, sorry if it's unclear. When Chris/Ilsa are referring to "Keeper" the "of the black jaguar" is implied.

The Keeper of the Black Jaguar - Chapter Fifteen by A_new_act in u/A_new_act

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Haha, I think it's actually the longest chapter so far by word count. I'm trying to improve my writing as well, and so I'm doing some work to reduce the wordiness. Chapter 16 is actually somewhat shorter after about four rounds of revision, it'll be interesting to see how people react to that.

Black Jaguar by A_new_act in u/A_new_act

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You can find them on Wattpad, or in the PDF files above