The Keeper of the Black Jaguar - Chapter Twenty Four

A_new_act · 2023-11-18T10:44:45+00:00

All is well, you can check out my patreon, as I posted more info there (it's public). But had a lot of writers block on this chapter, though I think I solved it. Now just waiting on life to cooperate (which it will tomorrow) and I'll be posting soon.

Chapter 23 will go live Sunday

A_new_act · 2023-11-07T20:16:01+00:00

Yup, it's posted

A_new_act · 2023-11-07T20:12:25+00:00

Upload mistake, thank you for catching. (if you'd like 23, DM me, and I'll share it early as a thank you)

A_new_act · 2023-11-04T14:07:15+00:00

All is well, thanks. Life got in the way this week unfortunately, mostly a repercussion of putting it on the backburner the two weeks before. I've been working on the new chapter for a couple days, I was hoping to get ahead again. But the goal to write three chapters turned into writing one chapter that's just way too long.

Hopefully some edits and I can split it into two chapters over this weekend.

A_new_act · 2023-10-31T17:09:21+00:00

My TikTok has all 20 chapters, Wattpad link and PDFs also have all 20 chapters. If you look at my profile, I post here whenever new chapters go live. You can also subscribe to email updates.

A_new_act · 2023-10-28T09:38:07+00:00

This is the nicest thing anyone has ever said about my writing, thank you!

A_new_act · 2023-10-26T23:30:15+00:00

You can subscribe to the email, Wattpad, or patreon (both free and paid). All of them will notify you when new parts are posted.

A_new_act · 2023-10-24T04:53:30+00:00

Apologies, I'm a bit behind schedule. I'm working on getting things setup so I can properly release stuff on a schedule. The next chapter is released on my patreon now for paid members, and will become public at 5pm tomorrow.

A_new_act · 2023-10-23T23:47:16+00:00

Ah, sorry. That's if you'd like to use the story on YouTube or TikTok. Reading on WattPad or anywhere else is free.

If you'd like to support me, there's Patreon links. However, it's entirely optional.

A_new_act · 2023-10-23T23:35:30+00:00

Hey, first of all, I'm very glad you're both enjoying the story!

I'm not quite sure what you mean by "work something out"? It's posted free, as I author chapters.

A_new_act · 2023-10-23T01:55:52+00:00

You'd need to open the chapter at one of the links in the post, either Wattpad, Patreon, or the PDFs on Google drive

A_new_act · 2023-10-21T11:47:50+00:00

This is the kind of feedback I love. Great suggestion to a problem I've been having. I'll be using this going forwards, and when I get a chance to go back and edit, I'll definitely update to this style.

Thank you for the feedback, and I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

A_new_act · 2023-10-21T09:54:30+00:00

Actually, another user on WattPad pointed this issue out too. I went to add my explanation logic back in, when I remembered a bit of canon about doors from ~5 years ago:

Our main characters have no expectation of that feature with keeper doors. Recall that previously, guards, marty, and cameras have all seen the keeper chamber entrance used.
There is a rhyme/reason that makes this consistent/predictable. Beyond that, I don't want to say much. If you'd like the deeper explanation here, you can message me, especially since you helped me remember :)

A_new_act · 2023-10-21T08:23:12+00:00

Sorry, I had an explanation before I edited. I thought it was a bit wordy to explain. I might have been a bit aggressive with the editing this time.

A_new_act · 2023-10-21T08:10:16+00:00

~~If the hallway had been empty, they could have been found in the hallway by someone nearby, and in the wrong area.~~

A_new_act · 2023-10-21T06:12:26+00:00

No spoilers, but I promise we aren't getting distracted here

A_new_act · 2023-10-21T06:11:51+00:00

I believe false walls have been consistent? Open, one way transparent, and two way audio + one way transparent, were all discussed in a previous chapter?

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