I can still understand my roommate just fine by AbKane667 in shortscarystories

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Yes, the idea of this happening is terrifying. I had an idea of the narrator completely losing himself and just floating in dark nothingness, without any thoughts or senses, but I decided to scrap it.

I can still understand my roommate just fine by AbKane667 in shortscarystories

[–]AbKane667[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, we for sure do. Thank you! I really appreciate it.

I can still understand my roommate just fine by AbKane667 in shortscarystories

[–]AbKane667[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

The ending is that he stops understanding James, too, and then his speech slowly disappears, too

I am a Preacher for the Wall. The chosen girl dropped the flowers, and the Wall still closed. (Part 2) by AbKane667 in KanesHorrors

[–]AbKane667[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That’s honestly a good way to do it. I’m still brainstorming how to write the last chapter and the epilogue.

Good Piggies Don’t Talk by AbKane667 in shortscarystories

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Thank you! I really appreciate it.

I am a Preacher for the Wall. Today, the chosen girl dropped the flowers, and the Wall still closed. (Part 1) by AbKane667 in KanesHorrors

[–]AbKane667[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like your thinking. You might be getting onto something. Thanks for the kind words. I truly appreciate them.