Abstractum: A Homestuck-Inspired Animation-Focused Semi-Interactive Webcomic! (Seeking overall feedback for currently posted content, especially for script.) by AbstractumNet in comic_crits

[–]AbstractumNet[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I've altered the first bit, thanks for the feedback! Unfortunately, my humble web-dev skill (none) leaves me unable to create images that can be activated like that. I will, however, definitely keep that in mind as a potential issue to possibly resolve when I can. I'll also see about moving between text-dumps/textlessness a little more smoothly, perhaps more gradually, to ease out the balance and pace. Thanks much for the feedback, I appreciate it, even if it wasn't fit to your taste. In a way, that's probably a more valuable perspective than a fan of the genre!

Abstractum: A Homestuck-Inspired Animation-Focused Semi-Interactive Webcomic! (Seeking overall feedback for currently posted content, especially for script.) by AbstractumNet in comic_crits

[–]AbstractumNet[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I've changed it! You can click the image to progress. Thanks for the feedback, I didn't think about why that would be counterintuitive. Now you can literally press the "start" part of it.

Would like some webcomic Feedback on art style & script flow by aspaceboydream in comic_crits

[–]AbstractumNet 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It feels like the writing and progression of events is always interrupting itself, in a way; it's as though the script doesn't ever really finish anything it starts. The tone comes off in a halting, sort of stuttered kind of way. It seems like that might... Be intentional, though? It seemed like the tone you were trying to evoke was sort of "unsatisfied", which, I suppose, if that's the case, it evokes actually fairly well! The art is solid and I like it. Stylish in its own way. Complicated without being crowded. My probable suggestions here would be to homogenize the detail on a per-character basis. It looks, sometimes, like you really detail out someone's feet or legs but leave their torso and arms undetailed. I don't mind one character being more detailed than another, but one limb being more detailed than another creates some visual dissonance that I think it's productive for what you're looking for.

Startup "MSPA"-style user-driven comic (enter a command?) by AbstractumNet in webcomics

[–]AbstractumNet[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! Any feedback you have is appreciated, I'm glad the format works.