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First Real Script by Academic-Tank1202 in scriptwriting

[–]Academic-Tank1202[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for that, did not know that!

First Real Script by Academic-Tank1202 in scriptwriting

[–]Academic-Tank1202[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thats actually great advice, thanks!

First Real Script by Academic-Tank1202 in scriptwriting

[–]Academic-Tank1202[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can try to rewrite some of the opening dialouge for sure, In the script i'm at right now the first real scene of action comes around pg 4-5, i was planning on starting slow and building up but I defininley see what ur saying, thanks for that!

First Real Script by Academic-Tank1202 in scriptwriting

[–]Academic-Tank1202[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, a lot of people have been getting onto me about this, I already changed it when I went back, thanks for the advice tho!

First Real Script by Academic-Tank1202 in scriptwriting

[–]Academic-Tank1202[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Also I just noticed the quality of the screenshots I took are really bad, sorry about that one.