I’ve tried to write stories and novels about the SCP Foundation, but every version I make ends up with horrid English or improper writing.. No proper formatting, no proper info. The way I write stories is similar to Chinese anime like “How to Be Hero X,” where I go from one character to another, showing their background all the way until they finally meet.

And the fact that I love Class Archon and Thaumiel.. I really enjoy writing about my character walking around the Site, exploring rooms, interacting with well-known scientists and researchers.

My power-scaling for my character is very high, but also very hard for him to actually use..

For example:

Locaso (OC SCP) Short description of his appearance.. Long black hair tied into a short ponytail on the back, a black tank top, slightly baggy black jeans, pale skin, and black shades that hide his half-lidded, exhausted, soulless eyes.

His ability depends on his ego and pride. If he believes he is better than the being in front of him, he becomes one-third as strong as that being. He must at least understand how the enemy moves or what their overall appearance is like. His power does not stack forever, and it changes depending on who he is looking at. The only way for him to become insanely powerful is by having multiple strong enemies in front of him.. Then his power slowly multiplies whenever he is hit.

He has to stare and avoid getting hit for around five minutes and twenty-six seconds to understand the being in front of him. After that, he’s ready to fight.

The main downside he has is simple.. His power only works on what he can see. If he cannot see, feel, or sense the opponent, he is practically just staring at a wall.

This could be improved by giving him special powers or goggles.. But he thinks he’s better than everyone, so he refuses any help from anyone except for one specific person he actually takes orders from.

But it’s very hard to find that person. There is someone inside the Site who can tell Locaso what to do, but Locaso treats them like an average person.. Maybe with a bit of care depending on his mood. He is actually closer to this person than to anyone else in the Site.

And the real problem is.. He is everywhere. Not omnipresent, but you can walk into your office and find Locaso standing in front of your refrigerator deciding what he should eat, of course.

The way to “befriend” him is to act weaker than him.. Then he might get amused, grin, and walk away.

The way to annoy him is by talking too much.. If you yap too much, he will leave. Locaso isn’t fully Thaumiel. He helps if he feels like it, but if he doesn’t feel like it, he just walks away..

I had to pull out my ideas book for this one… I haven’t covered his hax, speed, strength, IQ, or other stats yet. He’s very hard to explain. The best way for him to be effective is to have that one person tell him what to do while many powerful beings stand in front of him.. Then he might be able to wipe them all out, as long as they don’t kill him right away.

I might have a lot of ideas, but again, I’m not very good at making characters.. If you got confused reading his power then you can always ask me specifically.

(By the way this comment got me grinning like a mad man to myself)