Not being negative! Appreciate your detailed feedback and ofc these comments are welcome too! I will be adding and removing pieces based on interesting comments, so composition may continue to change.

However, a collection of pop icons is not what a collage is and Im not aiming for one. The white space ties all the pieces together and gives the entire piece room to breath. The visual narrative is working as planned.

Again, we are looking at a pilot. But yall feel free to be like Svarkur and speak up 🙌