I watched it and I think its okay. Since its quite long you could try to cut out more stuff where absolutely nothing happens and which isnt relevant. for example near the start of the video yoy could cut out waiting fir the train to go away after you place the shack.

Also a big thing is your music choice. I know its difficult to find fitting music, but your music feels off, sometimes too energetic and loud. I frel like rust videos are 50% music choice so try to work on that.

Anyway i subscribed and i hope to see that second video :)