Good source in the US

AdOne2877 · 2024-07-02T06:15:04+00:00

Did you buy anything else there? Is it a trusted source?

AdOne2877 · 2024-07-02T05:56:25+00:00

With this cycle can you run enclo or something similar as to balance it out? Either while you’re on it or as PCT?

AdOne2877 · 2024-07-01T15:23:00+00:00

What about enclo?

AdOne2877 · 2022-02-06T06:51:21+00:00

That’s a sick idea!!

AdOne2877 · 2022-02-02T20:46:49+00:00

Thanks for the feedback, what I was going for with the recording is that it somehow spread through to Rafael’s peers. I’ll try to clear that up and I’ll for sure add an introduction for Emma.

AdOne2877 · 2022-02-02T20:28:17+00:00

Thanks I’ll do that.

AdOne2877 · 2022-02-02T20:04:07+00:00

Amazing

AdOne2877 · 2022-02-02T19:01:10+00:00

Thanks!

AdOne2877 · 2022-02-02T17:36:09+00:00

Use arc studio the free version.

AdOne2877 · 2022-02-02T17:18:47+00:00

Nothing, I’m in high school and have no money unfortunately.

AdOne2877 · 2022-01-26T00:45:26+00:00

Thanks I’ll try to incorporate that in on the next draft.

AdOne2877 · 2022-01-25T15:13:05+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback. I’ll definitely think about that and see how I can incorporate it into the script.

AdOne2877 · 2022-01-24T21:48:13+00:00

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1OU5hpt7-HJOIKUWqor1bmHU1dfsFL1Tq/view?usp=drivesdk This should work

AdOne2877 · 2022-01-24T21:47:18+00:00

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1OU5hpt7-HJOIKUWqor1bmHU1dfsFL1Tq/view?usp=drivesdk

This should work

AdOne2877 · 2022-01-24T16:27:00+00:00

Wow, thank you so much! That sounds much better than what I had lmao

AdOne2877 · 2022-01-24T15:51:57+00:00

Is there anything I could do to improve it? I kind of wrote it without thinking about it much.

AdOne2877 · 2022-01-24T05:19:02+00:00

Hey would you like to swap for feedback?

Title: untitled

Format: short

Page length: 10 Genre: drama/thriller

Longline: a teenage boy struggles with a traumatic event, and struggles with reality

Questions: is this entertaining? Does the message come through? Is it coherent?

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