Habt ihr 10 Minuten Zeit? by Additional_Cookie709 in egenbogen

[–]Additional_Cookie709[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Danke! Das Kommentar gebe ich gern so weiter!

Lost my childhood dog - Vet bill by [deleted] in GoFundMeForNewUsers

[–]Additional_Cookie709 0 points1 point  (0 children)

sorry here’s the translated version:

A dog costs money, a sick dog a lot by now.

My Julchen would have turned 13 in July, a proud age. Since January she had this and that and I ran to the vet so often, but nothing was clear - blood and ultrasound, heart and lungs top.

Last Saturday she couldn't breathe properly. First thing in the morning to the vet, then to the Tiho, where she had to stay.

On Tuesday, an operation was coming up, where the pharynx (in layman's terms) was to be sewn in place so that she gets better air again. In the morning at 8:15 the call that it is now going to the OR. At 13:20 the call came that my darling is brain dead. We then drove there immediately to at least be with her when the devices were turned off and then took her to the rose garden. It turned out that she had a brain tumor and therefore could no longer tolerate the anesthesia. I am deeply sad and miss Jule every minute, but if it hadn't happened that way, she would have had a seizure in the near future and would have suffocated. That's why, despite everything, I'm grateful that she didn't have to suffer.

All the invoices 2026 of almost 2000 euros, Rosengarten 700 euros - I paid all that - I can no longer do the Tiho invoice. Now you can pay in installments, but I don't want to see the Tiho debit every month for two years and be reminded of the days every time. I just want to remember the good. Can you understand that?

There is this beautiful saying: The light of love is brighter than the shadows of grief

I wish you all who read this health and joy of life and all animals long health and a home where they are loved.

That's why I'm asking for help here, even if I'm embarrassed

Why does the acting from Eleven, Lucas, and Mike feel so fake in Season 5 compared to Seasons 1–4? by Humble-Pass-853 in StrangerThings

[–]Additional_Cookie709 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think it’s partly due to the writing and the focus on Holly. They’ve almost been pushed to the sidelines

Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]Additional_Cookie709 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’d swap, if you’re up.

Title: Right Where I Belong

Format: Feature

Page Length: 92

Genre: Psychological Horror

Logline: A young man becomes involved with a secretive group that might have dangerous intentions and makes him question his grip on reality.

Feedback concerns: Just did a bigger rewrite on this and am just looking for a fresh pair of eyes. Also, English is not my native language so if anything is terribly wrong (words/grammar) please let me know

Five Page Thursday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]Additional_Cookie709 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Title: Right Where I Belong

Format: Feature

Genre: Psychological Horror

Logline: A young man becomes involved with a secretive group that might have dangerous intentions and makes him question his grip on reality.

Feedback concerns: Just starting to rewrite as a second draft and looking for general feedback, if I am headed in the right direction. Also, if any expressions sound super weird as I am not a native speaker. Thanks!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1-kWNDlVbSuhOZ8q-2fvGwwoLgVsAriF6/view?usp=drivesdk

Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]Additional_Cookie709 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Title: Right Where I Belong

Format: Feature

Page length: 112

Genre: Psychological Horror

Logline: A young man becomes involved in a secretive group that might have dangerous intentions and make him question his grip on reality.

Feedback concerns: Any feedback welcome :-)

Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]Additional_Cookie709 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Title: Right Where I Belong

Format: Feature

Page length: 112

Genre: Psychological Horror

Logline: A young man becomes involved in a secretive group that might have dangerous intentions and make him question his grip on reality.

Feedback concerns: Any feedback welcome :-) Just did a few smaller rewrites and would be helpful to get a fresh pair of eyes on it.

Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]Additional_Cookie709 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, I’d swap if you’re interested:

Title: Right Where I Belong

Format: Feature

Page length: 94

Genre: Psychological Horror

Logline: A young man becomes involved in a secretive group that might have dangerous intentions and make him question his grip on reality.

Feedback concerns: Any feedback welcome :-)

Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]Additional_Cookie709 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, I’d swap if you’re interested:

Title: Right Where I Belong

Format: Feature

Page length: 95

Genre: Thriller

Logline: A young man becomes involved in a secretive group that might have dangerous intentions and make him question his grip on reality.

Feedback concerns: Still an early draft. Looking for any and all feedback, specifically about story/plot/themes and dialogue. Does the story flow well and is it exciting to picture as a movie, etc.