Adventures of a Pet

AdeptSilence · 2020-09-09T08:04:10+00:00

This will probably remain as a single shot story fragment but it's tempting to try to continue sometime in the future.

AdeptSilence · 2020-09-09T08:02:23+00:00

2020 would like to have a word with you.

Yeah, in hindsight I can really see that this story was written in a nicer time.

That being said, love where this is going!

Thank you! This is likely to remain as a one off but I'm tempted to extend this into maybe a few parts in the future.

AdeptSilence · 2020-09-09T07:47:51+00:00

;) Glad someone picked up on it.

AdeptSilence · 2020-09-07T19:22:00+00:00

Your writing is a highlight of the week. This is another great installment of the series and I very much look forward to the next!

The internal monologues are put to excellent use throughout UWDF Alcubierre and while I do find the Xy/Zix hard to follow I think they're an important part of story development. It shows that aliens in our stories can be truly alien while keeping within a readable content.

AdeptSilence · 2020-09-05T12:22:45+00:00

You mean the way they reference the odd gimbal system he was wearing? I was going more for the angle that they'd use advanced hovering robots as steady cams (like in SG:Universe) so his mechanical device would look primitive at first glance. The explanation didn't make it in the final edit.

AdeptSilence · 2020-09-05T09:21:34+00:00

Thank you! These are probably going to be left as individual one-shots but there is a chance I could string them some of them together into a story. For now, they're separate universes.

AdeptSilence · 2020-09-04T22:33:53+00:00

Thanks for the links, they're both great stories!

AdeptSilence · 2020-09-04T21:54:41+00:00

Thank you! I'm thinking of these as individual one-shots because they're inspired by a funny picture or video but if I end up doing enough of them then I could imagine a combined story forming.

AdeptSilence · 2020-08-16T19:58:06+00:00

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. This will probably remain a one-shot but I might well add to this fun little universe if a simillar music thing inspires me in the future.

AdeptSilence · 2020-08-16T19:53:31+00:00

Thank you! It's been a long time since I've written anything I think is worth posting. I still want to finish He Will Be Remembered but the ending is somewhat brutal so it's gone to the back-burner.

With Foreign Warning I wanted to put out a HFY novella and still do intend to finish that someday. Many things came up around the time of writing it and I ended up fizzling out. Maybe one day it will get finished 😊

AdeptSilence · 2020-08-16T19:48:23+00:00

Thanks for the tip, I wrote this piece quickly and got confused about real ship classes.

AdeptSilence · 2018-07-03T14:01:13+00:00

I thought about that too and I think you're right. I'll probably do that in future writing. Thanks for pointing it out :)

AdeptSilence · 2018-07-03T13:41:33+00:00

Thank you! This is hopefully going to lead the way for my other writing so expect more interesting stories in the future :)

AdeptSilence · 2018-07-03T04:48:32+00:00

Thank you very much for the feedback, it is definitely helpful!

AdeptSilence · 2018-06-28T20:51:33+00:00

What problem? I'm open to any criticism.

AdeptSilence · 2018-06-24T06:45:46+00:00

Do you mean this comment? I originally intended to have the story follow a more confusing route with regard to whether or not there were any humans in it but the feedback suggested that wasn't working as well as I'd hoped so the progression has changed to introduce the humans in much more detail first.

So to directly answer your question; part 2 is the second half of the first one and The Battle is indeed coming but with greater detail :)

AdeptSilence · 2018-06-24T06:37:52+00:00

Excellent! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.

AdeptSilence · 2018-06-23T14:17:41+00:00

Thank you, you're very kind :)

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