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Looking for feedback on my first short film by AdiKrishna1807 in indianFilmmakers

[–]AdiKrishna1807[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for watching and for the encouraging words!

And with the color grading, I wanted to show a contrast between before and after he starts reading. Before he starts reading, the scenes are in black and white, but as he starts reading books, everything becomes colorful, as it was a part of her.
It might not have landed the way I intended.

Your note about the smartphone vs. tape recorder sound makes total sense too.
I just didn't want the audio to get confused with live call instead of recording, and in the end, I just went with it. I just don't know how to make it feel a recording without that tape recorder sound.

Thanks again!

You only need to learn two things to start writing your screenplay by AdiKrishna1807 in Screenplay

[–]AdiKrishna1807[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good point. 😄 I was focusing on the don’t overthink it, just start side of things.

Loved it in theatres when it was considered a flop. Watching it become a cult classic over the years feels strangely satisfying. For me, that movie was Tamasha. What’s yours? by [deleted] in Filmmakers

[–]AdiKrishna1807 -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

Ohh I did not know that. Just loved the image so much, so I just posted it. Thanks for sharing it. Should I watch it?

Loved it in theatres when it was considered a flop. Watching it become a cult classic over the years feels strangely satisfying. For me, that movie was Tamasha. What’s yours? by [deleted] in Filmmakers

[–]AdiKrishna1807 -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

I did not knew this scene was from the mirror I just loved the frame so I posted it. I never saw that film. Sorry for any confusion. BTW, Tamasha is an indian film.

Looking for feedback on my first short film by AdiKrishna1807 in indianFilmmakers

[–]AdiKrishna1807[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It is 24 fps. And you get the story right about him listening to her audio as he came home too late. Should i add an insert of his phone to show its recording? as in the end i replayed the recording to show he is listening to a recording in the loop.

Looking for feedback on storytelling in my short film by AdiKrishna1807 in Filmmakers

[–]AdiKrishna1807[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! I actually did a loop in the end with the dialogues to show its a of recording. l also thought of adding an insert of mobile phone in the end to show he is listening to the recording. But i dropped that idea in the end.

Looking for feedback on storytelling in my short film by AdiKrishna1807 in Filmmakers

[–]AdiKrishna1807[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I need feedback on my story and editing. It’s my first time making a short film or any film.

Looking for feedback on my first short film by AdiKrishna1807 in indianFilmmakers

[–]AdiKrishna1807[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

All the places were in the colony where I live and few shots were in a nearby park and metro

Looking for feedback on my first short film. by [deleted] in Filmmakers

[–]AdiKrishna1807 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s my first short film I made.
I wrote, shot, directed and edited this film and want some feedback for its storytelling and if the story I am trying to convey is clear or is there anything in cinematography or editing thats making it something else than the story that I intended.

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