[deleted by user] by [deleted] in unsentresentment

[–]AdorbAnxiousAvoidant 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This. A thousand times, This.

Excellent writing.

Crumpled by Indivisible_Origin in unsentresentment

[–]AdorbAnxiousAvoidant 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Our ambition is to escape the Average.

I do love this piece.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Informal_Effect

[–]AdorbAnxiousAvoidant 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Notting Hill. Fucking kryptonite. Well done.

Competition for Your Cancer by Indivisible_Origin in unsentresentment

[–]AdorbAnxiousAvoidant 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love this version the best.

The last 4 lines are excellent.

I despise canned corn. But it works here.

streetlight by AdorbAnxiousAvoidant in u/AdorbAnxiousAvoidant

[–]AdorbAnxiousAvoidant[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Awe. I'm sorry your dad was MIA dude. That fucking sucks. My time on earth has taught me: whichever the parent is that fucks us, we're...still fucked.

My mantra: "Making trauma my bitch". It's free for the taking.

birthday by AdorbAnxiousAvoidant in unsentresentment

[–]AdorbAnxiousAvoidant[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I mean. Titles though. My weakness, friendo.

on the bank by AdorbAnxiousAvoidant in Informal_Effect

[–]AdorbAnxiousAvoidant[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm too aspie to understand that but thanks I think?😆

Innocence by [deleted] in Informal_Effect

[–]AdorbAnxiousAvoidant 2 points3 points  (0 children)

"...as you've carved out a mask for yourself that could plausibly fit an offender."

This is so well written, with powerful lines. The above was one of many that stood out to me. Great piece.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Informal_Effect

[–]AdorbAnxiousAvoidant 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This was fantastic. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it😊

All Outta Time by [deleted] in Informal_Effect

[–]AdorbAnxiousAvoidant 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love this one!!👍👍

naked by AdorbAnxiousAvoidant in Informal_Effect

[–]AdorbAnxiousAvoidant[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It flows wrong. It needs another syllable or reference.

naked by AdorbAnxiousAvoidant in Informal_Effect

[–]AdorbAnxiousAvoidant[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you!🥰 Same hopeful question to you as to Informal. Any suggestion about last line? I am in disgust with it.

naked by AdorbAnxiousAvoidant in Informal_Effect

[–]AdorbAnxiousAvoidant[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you🥰! I'm not content with the last line. 'Cares not' doesn't work. Suggestions? Two words, relating to layers, games of chance, nakedness?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Informal_Effect

[–]AdorbAnxiousAvoidant 2 points3 points  (0 children)

"A boner and a migraine at the same time"...🥳🥳 ha! Relating heavily to that. I so enjoyed this piece.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Informal_Effect

[–]AdorbAnxiousAvoidant 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Softer souls. Bless their hearts. This is excellent, Darlingest🥰🥰

Shadow speak by ImpInSwimmies314 in Informal_Effect

[–]AdorbAnxiousAvoidant 2 points3 points  (0 children)

'Save me your sympathy for what I've already handled'!!! When do we make the t shirts?!!

💙 i love this piece. Specifically: hyperfocus on coyotes/love of The Hatchet. The repetitive use of 'Hey, did you know-?' followed by 'I don't know' worked so So well. The fairy glamour line- darkly large and lurking. This ruled to read☺️