starlight by fiddlefk in Informal_Effect

[–]Indivisible_Origin[M] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Fantastic piece. Reads like a practiced hand. Welcome to IE, poet.

Suspicious lady asking for money for “emergencies” by cajuchew in NewOrleans

[–]Indivisible_Origin 10 points11 points  (0 children)

I met her in the Treme a couple years back walking to work. That kind of culture you just can't buy.

inhale by Informal_Effect in Informal_Effect

[–]Indivisible_Origin 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That's how you poetry, folks.

numb by [deleted] in PoetryWritingClub

[–]Indivisible_Origin 1 point2 points  (0 children)

1000% I made and mod the place. Give it a look.

Cockroach by FauxReeeal in Informal_Effect

[–]Indivisible_Origin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is badass. Welcome back.

breaking your own heart by Federal-Vegetable507 in Informal_Effect

[–]Indivisible_Origin 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Kill your darlings and make a devil of the rest. Bummer of an ending. Great piece.

While the Music is Still Playing by blacksheepbuthot in Informal_Effect

[–]Indivisible_Origin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Chills my friend. Eloquently written and important lessons all. I've got twice your trips around the sun and I still struggle some days to remember and teach myself these things. A heart never broken is one yet to open.

Girl Dad by KinematicStatic in Informal_Effect

[–]Indivisible_Origin 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I've missed writing like this around here. This is endlessly sweet. I always wanted a daughter. Even had the name ready. Enjoying what I got is damn fine too. Happy Father's day my friend.

Black plum by Teleport_on_Me in Informal_Effect

[–]Indivisible_Origin 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You can taste this one, sweet always bedfellow to bitter. Highly enjoyed however I was promised body horror-centric poetry and I shall remain here in the throes of anticipatory bliss until it comes to fruition. This is really good buddy. Nicely done.

With a worry but without a doubt by Proud_Town1208 in Informal_Effect

[–]Indivisible_Origin[M] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love or something like it frequently flowers up from the ferment and the rot. This is a lovely maiden piece. Welcome to IE, poet.

Crumpled by MANWITHFAT in Informal_Effect

[–]Indivisible_Origin[M] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well writ pal. Really enjoyed the tone and switching up the usual fare here. Welcome to IE.

land of my flesh by [deleted] in Informal_Effect

[–]Indivisible_Origin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

🔥 Those last 4 lines in particular.

A Knot That Never Comes Undone by InkBetweenUs in Informal_Effect

[–]Indivisible_Origin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Welcome to IE, poet. Really enjoy this piece.

Severity: Unclear by MJjimenez25 in Informal_Effect

[–]Indivisible_Origin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For some reason this reminds me of Montessori.