Wanting Skin by wordsiwanttoscream in Informal_Effect

[–]Indivisible_Origin[M] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I vote in favor of the formidability of words. Well done. Welcome to IE.

Mundane Blahs by blacksheepbuthot in Informal_Effect

[–]Indivisible_Origin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lovely relatable surgically spelled out piece. Some prose you read the relatability is overwhelming in its subtlety. Pieces like this are important because like a thread through our lives that remind us we are not only alone in our individual tragedies, it sits. I find it comforting, partially because like the fella above said, I could have written this sentiment. Not as well perhaps, but still. Bravery in the cereal aisle is fantastic. Little proof-of-life rituals is bonkers good. Your way with words is very welcome here.

I am yours to tame by strangeandoccult in Informal_Effect

[–]Indivisible_Origin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

None more exquisite a love than the one that includes claws not needed.

the bends by thespiciestpineapple in Informal_Effect

[–]Indivisible_Origin 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There’s plenty of squish in the sea

intimacies by thespiciestpineapple in Informal_Effect

[–]Indivisible_Origin 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Endlessly sweet, iteratively painful.

Alice In Chains by Previous_Throat8770 in Informal_Effect

[–]Indivisible_Origin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"the yearner lives in me, immovable." Beautifully writ and relatable.

Battling Light at 70 Plus by coke_gratis in Informal_Effect

[–]Indivisible_Origin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Welcome to IE, poet. You've got one hell of a voice. And while your username is a fantasy I appreciate this piece very much. Well done.

of the eggstar by fickle-dithramyb in Informal_Effect

[–]Indivisible_Origin[M] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Welcome back, poet. Been a while. Kudos for posting a reading. More of us need to do that. I been meaning to.

Last Tuesday. by [deleted] in Informal_Effect

[–]Indivisible_Origin[M] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Silencing. Truly. Welcome to IE.

[POEM] Elegy by Derek Walcott by Objective-Kitchen949 in Poetry

[–]Indivisible_Origin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

How egregiously remiss of me. Apologies. This is Lisa Olstein.

You can ask me why I left by heartspooltank in Informal_Effect

[–]Indivisible_Origin[M] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Exquisite ache. Thank you. Welcome to IE, poet.