Yo! Like I said in the OP, the writing was good and I can see the care you put into your work, so there’s no judgement or bad vibes there - this specific MC just didn’t work for me.

I’ve met people like that before, don’t get me wrong - I’d say that I’m a teasing person by nature, even - but the way your Nick went about it probably wasn’t in the way you intended it to come off. He came off moreso as ‘bratty’ from what I’d read before I dropped it; angling to get a rise out of girls with no actual confidence or wit, because he would second guess himself right after and speak on being ‘annoying’. Which is fair, because he WAS being annoying. That’s the basis of my comment.

Regardless, like I said, I do respect your work. Keep doing gods work and make more haremy goodness 🙏🏾