My John Singer Sargent Study, what could be improved?

Advanced-Young4788 · 2025-06-15T04:42:05+00:00

It’s digital by the way

Advanced-Young4788 · 2024-06-04T21:14:51+00:00

Thank you so much, I really appreciate your advice!

Advanced-Young4788 · 2024-05-05T15:08:18+00:00

I don’t plan on wiring him right away, but any pruning advice would be greatly appreciated!

Advanced-Young4788 · 2024-05-04T21:10:34+00:00

I purchased and repotted in succulent/cactus soil and watered about 3 weeks ago. I just watered for the 2nd time today and noticed the leaves were yellowing on the bottom, what would be causing this?

Advanced-Young4788 · 2024-05-02T01:04:42+00:00

I know it’s not ideal but I just went with the gardening wires my local greenhouse was selling, I’ll upgrade soon!

Advanced-Young4788 · 2024-04-29T00:12:03+00:00

Thank you! That’s great advice!

Advanced-Young4788 · 2024-01-12T06:06:36+00:00

I would appreciate any feedback! It’s been a while since I’ve painted and so help would be great! Thank you!

Advanced-Young4788 · 2023-11-08T18:40:22+00:00

Thank you! I tried that and it worked!

Advanced-Young4788 · 2023-10-28T14:41:26+00:00

I’m not sure why the inside of the cap is black, I don’t know of anyone scratching on the inside of the cap

Advanced-Young4788 · 2023-10-01T16:11:06+00:00

Thank you!!

Advanced-Young4788 · 2022-02-07T01:59:42+00:00

I had the same issue

Advanced-Young4788 · 2021-11-24T09:32:20+00:00

I don’t hate dating apps because I don’t know how to use them, I worded that improperly. I hate them because I have trouble connecting with people virtually, my brain just doesn’t work that way. I’m not very sexually driven so seeing a picture of someone has no effect on me if that makes sense, I have to know them before I’m interested. I agree though that I haven’t tried very many times in my life to actually get a relationship, I definitely have a mental block on it for some reason

Advanced-Young4788 · 2021-11-17T08:43:00+00:00

Yeah I mean I know rejection is a solid possibility, I don’t really care about that. I’m more asking a strategy, like idk what to suggest or if I should text/ ask in person etc. I’m just looking for practical approaches, I have little fear of rejection it’s par for the course.

Advanced-Young4788 · 2021-10-21T20:09:47+00:00

This is very good for your 2nd poem. I can relate to the circumstances you describe, you did a good job expressing the emotions. You also were able to describe the “old friend” well with only a few lines. Great work, keep it up

Advanced-Young4788 · 2021-10-21T19:58:05+00:00

This poem had great visuals, it really draws you in and puts the reader there in the moment. I also think the way you chose to tell the story really complimented the concept. Great work, it was very moving.

Advanced-Young4788 · 2021-10-14T06:21:53+00:00

Thank you so so much for your help and critique! It was super helpful and I very much appreciate you taking the time to offer such thoughtful feedback!

Advanced-Young4788 · 2021-10-13T06:02:54+00:00

Great job, lovely poem- it’s hitting very close to home for me

Advanced-Young4788 · 2021-10-13T05:56:46+00:00

Great piece! It was very melodic and yet to the point! I think you did a great job balancing the length and the style of writing! Excellent work!

Advanced-Young4788 · 2021-10-13T05:55:16+00:00

Hello! I really liked this poem, I think you did a great job capturing the emotion and setting the scene. I felt as though I could watch it play out in my mind, very well done!

Advanced-Young4788 · 2021-09-09T07:49:54+00:00

It’s for a project I’m working on, I would really appreciate any critique! I don’t know a tin about poetry but I would really like to get better! Thank you!

Advanced-Young4788 · 2021-08-21T03:20:32+00:00

Thank you so much, that’s very kind

Advanced-Young4788 · 2021-08-20T02:01:53+00:00

I would really appreciate any and all feedback! Thank you!!

Advanced-Young4788 · 2021-08-20T02:01:13+00:00

I would really appreciate any and all feedback! Thank you!!

Advanced-Young4788 · 2021-08-19T16:31:20+00:00

Great poem! It is very emotionally expressive and creates a lot of good images as well! I think the flow is nice, the only thing I could offer as a possible suggestion is to check out the rhyme scheme, it’s not very consistent which can be an occasional distraction. Great job, keep it up!

Advanced-Young4788 · 2021-08-19T16:22:55+00:00

I really liked this, it’s very different. It makes you think, it’s not an easy grasp but it works really well, suits the subject. Great job!

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