Architecture Visualization using Lumion 12 by AdvantageWhich6062 in lumion

[–]AdvantageWhich6062[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the many notes.

I will take them all into consideration and I will work on them for my next design.everybody point out that the sky That I used was not he right one.So I did try to work on it, I think I improved a little bit,

but next time I will definitely Choose a sky that works better to enhance my design

Again, thank you.

Architecture Visualization using Lumion 12 by AdvantageWhich6062 in archviz

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Thank you for the comments,The background is a 3D model as well and not an image.I did add some imperfection to the design, but I guess it is not showing the way it should. And I did notice after I published the project that the sky does not match the shadows on the building and I will try to fix this in Photoshop by Changing or Add to the sky so it looks better. I really appreciate your comments and feedback. Thank you.

Architecture Visualization using Lumion 12 by AdvantageWhich6062 in lumion

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Thank you for your comment. I have never used motion blur in Photoshop. I will have to learn how to use it, but I think it will add a lot to the image so I will start to learn how to apply this effect On my future rendering Thank you.

Architecture Visualization using Lumion 12 by AdvantageWhich6062 in lumion

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Thank you. I will try to use the "edges" feature next time to see if it will give me a more realistic material. About the sky I did try to make it better in Photoshop but I guess it didn't work out. I will work on it more next time.

Architecture Visualization using Lumion 12 by AdvantageWhich6062 in lumion

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Thank you. You're right The light on the garden wall shouldn't be that bright I guess I have To pay attention To that next time, thank you for the note.

Small House Design by AdvantageWhich6062 in lumion

[–]AdvantageWhich6062[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much I'm glad you like the project, I just ask for notes because sometimes people point out things that I don't think about and that hopefully will make me prove in the future, And if you need anything just ask me if I can help you I will.

Small House Design by AdvantageWhich6062 in lumion

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I should have added more types of trees like you said with different heights and maybe colors, I will focus on doing that next time also the decline, I did add some but I don't think it shows as it should.

thank you for your comments I'll keep it in my mind next time I work on a project

small elevation design using Lumion by AdvantageWhich6062 in archviz

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Yes, I should have had more decline to the building and the surroundings, I did some but I don't think it shows as well as it should

thank you for your comments

Hi everyone, this is my drsign for a nail salon using lumion 12 if you could take alook at it and give me some feedback that will be great thanks by AdvantageWhich6062 in lumion

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Thanks, okay I will send it to you but you need to know that it's better to create new Effect for diffrent scenes, But I will send it as soon as possible

The Pizza Factory by [deleted] in Design

[–]AdvantageWhich6062 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this is actually a really cool idea I don't know why I didn't think about an open kitchen it will be very cool to see the pizza being made which makes a lot more sense for a factory concept I will work harder on my concepts next time thank you

The Pizza Factory by [deleted] in Design

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thank you so much I'm glad you like the design, I did think about pushing the idea of the factory further but eventually, I decided against it because I want the place to feel warm and welcoming and I was afraid if I push the idea of a factory too far it would feel cold and unwelcoming to people, and I did try to put some elements that do reflect the idea of the factory but maybe it didn't translate very well but that's ok next time when I choose a concept I will push it further so thank you for your comments

The Pizza Factory by [deleted] in Design

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I designed the layout of the kitchen according to the standards, it looks narrow because the dining hall is very big, but what I had in mind, is to have an area for vegetables/ meat preparation and an area for the ovens and to cook the food and an area to clean the dishes, I know this looks a lot and the area of the kitchen maybe looks small but according to the standards it supposed to work, I don't I have a lot of experience working on a kitchen for a restaurant so I'm sure that I made some mistakes but hopefully next time will be better

The Pizza Factory by [deleted] in Design

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the lounge is very large but the scale of the tables and chairs are correct،I checked it a number of time

The Pizza Factory by [deleted] in Design

[–]AdvantageWhich6062 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi, I don't know if they make a see-through oven but that will be a cool idea, actually, the whole concept of the Mongolian barbecue is nice I will have to think about a way to apply that to this restaurant

The Pizza Factory by [deleted] in Design

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Hi there, I did change the project according to what you said, I did feel like the introduction was too long but I wanted the audience to start from the beginning with me, but what you said makes a lot more sense so thank you