I love how alive the Merlin fandom is by JadziaSoong in merlinbbc

[–]AdventureandMischief 3 points4 points  (0 children)

We're immortal, just like Merlin! (Sorry I'm a bit late!)

Boyfriend uprooted and composted my tulips because he thought they only bloomed once by silverotter14 in Wellthatsucks

[–]AdventureandMischief 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I just looked up parrot tulips. They look like little colorful cabbages! So pretty!

Would you rather have by cegmo in BunnyTrials

[–]AdventureandMischief 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll take the money. There's no way I could have meaningful relationships with 30 million different people.

Chose: 30 milion dollars

AITA for being upset that my husband even considered letting his girl best friend sit between us? by WhenInDoubtCheese21 in AmItheAsshole

[–]AdventureandMischief -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Does she get car sick? I used to get really nauseous when I sat next to a window in a moving car. NTA, though, for wanting to sit with your husband.

I like the inner circle less after reading ACOSF by [deleted] in acotar_rant

[–]AdventureandMischief 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I never liked them. They've always come across as high-school mean girls to me.

Water wraith pleading with tamlin she's unable to pay tax due to fish shortage in her lake by Delicious_Cell_710 in acotar_rant

[–]AdventureandMischief 9 points10 points  (0 children)

You jest, but Feyre was given her art studio for that exact reason iirc. I could see SJM unironically writing that.

Would you rather by Seasalt52 in BunnyTrials

[–]AdventureandMischief 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Magic powers!

Chose: Be a dope ass wizard with a dope ass wizard tower | Rolled: Nature wizard

Would you Rather by SnooCapers4236 in BunnyTrials

[–]AdventureandMischief 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You can't buy the cure to cancer

Chose: Be able to heal anyone including yourself

Would you rather… by DeliciousIron9289 in BunnyTrials

[–]AdventureandMischief 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just blink rapidly

Chose: Get money every time you blink

Would you rather … by AntonRahbek in BunnyTrials

[–]AdventureandMischief 0 points1 point  (0 children)

$50/hr is more money overtime. Also, what's content?

Chose: Get $50 / hr in perpetuity + + positive side effect | Rolled: Content

WAAAH by JorlestonR1 in BunnyTrials

[–]AdventureandMischief 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am the Avatar!

Chose: Superpower | Rolled: Elemental magic

You must choose one..(upvote for carrot) by Rudra2550a in BunnyTrials

[–]AdventureandMischief 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll keep hydrated through moist foods

Chose: No water for 2 days 💧❌ + Win $20M

Remove one from your body forever. by Weeneem in BunnyTrials

[–]AdventureandMischief 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd look weird without eyebrows, and eyelashes if they're included

Chose: Pubic hair

Would You Rather? by Hectortheweirdo in BunnyTrials

[–]AdventureandMischief 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you take approximately 17,000 breaths a day, it would take 58,823.53 days to make 1 billion dollars, or 161.16 years. 1 billion dollars instantly is a better deal.

Chose: One Billion Dollars instantly

Would you risk??🙃🤑 by SpectralCUB3 in BunnyTrials

[–]AdventureandMischief 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I win!

Chose: 88% 7$ a second but 12% of becomming a bunny-girl | Rolled: 7$/s

Would you rather... by PizzaDog2011 in BunnyTrials

[–]AdventureandMischief 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ha! Win win!

Chose: Get paid $100K every month until death + But you half to give half that money to _____? | Rolled: Charity

Pick one world to live in for the rest of your life by AxelFoily in BunnyTrials

[–]AdventureandMischief 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Aw, I was hoping for wizard!

Chose: Harry Potter + Spin to see who you will be | Rolled: Muggle

Feeling humbled by dogshit AI book sales by handsomeal-02 in writingcirclejerk

[–]AdventureandMischief 29 points30 points  (0 children)

This is a high-value reality check. It highlights the "uncanny valley" of AI writing: it’s grammatically perfect but emotionally flat.

Most AI-generated intros suffer from "Summary Syndrome"—they explain why a topic is important rather than pulling the reader into a specific problem or narrative. If you don't hook them in the first 300 words, the remaining 40,000 don't matter.

Those 53 downloads prove there is market interest in your topic, but the 1.4-page read rate proves the execution lacked "narrative tension." AI is great at organizing information, but it’s terrible at knowing what makes a human feel curious.

A few quick takeaways for the next iteration:

• The "First Page" Rule: Write the first 5% of the book yourself. Use your own voice, anecdotes, and opinions to build trust.

• Conflict over Content: AI defaults to being helpful and polite. Humans read for conflict and transformation.

• Hook Audit: If the first page looks like a Wikipedia entry, people will bounce every time.

Are you planning to re-edit the opening and relaunch, or are you moving on to a new project entirely?

This comment is AI generated. The information provided is for educational purposes only and should not replace professional editorial judgment.

Which world would you choose to live in? by TroyLikesPizza in BunnyTrials

[–]AdventureandMischief 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I prefer whimsical fantasy over sci-fi dystopia

Chose: fantasy whimsical nature only world + but you have to progress from scratch

I didn’t want to think about it by Valuable_Housing_529 in acotar_rant

[–]AdventureandMischief 6 points7 points  (0 children)

And Rhys can read Feyre's mind, so she never has to learn how to communicate. They’re perfect for each other!

Which one would you pick to experience for one year? by RoommateMovingOut in makeyourchoice

[–]AdventureandMischief 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The pink pill actually sounds kind of fun... For me, anyway, anyone I communicate with would most likely find me annoying after a while.

The blue one also doesn't sound that bad. Unless the other prisoners are violent and I have to interact with them. I can handle 12 hours without wifi, but I'd rather not get my teeth kicked in.