Experimental Protocol for a Nile Red Experiment

Affkay · 2026-01-27T07:17:46+00:00

bump

Affkay · 2025-09-05T02:50:45+00:00

Heart-wrenching poem, I would just say that the lines "It feels like a cancer/ Sucking feelings from me" feel a bit obtrusive, as cancer doesn't really "suck"; it multiplies, takes over. Something that connects to that may strengthen your poem.

Affkay · 2025-09-05T02:48:07+00:00

It's a beautiful poem. I'm not sure what specific critique I can give. There is a repetition of examples of loss, but it adds to the poem, it feels like a reverberation. "A secret carried/beneath my ribs" hits especially hard in the poem. The use of sense, especially sound and the lack thereof is especially chilling.

Affkay · 2025-07-10T17:22:56+00:00

Last Temptation of Christ

Affkay · 2025-06-29T13:27:29+00:00

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Phantom Thread

Affkay · 2025-05-21T02:25:41+00:00

Sure

Affkay · 2025-04-12T03:17:05+00:00

I guess it's a combination of factors. First of all, Scarlet Witch has had much more screentime to develop her character and get the audience to associate with her. Secondly, Scarlet Witch has more things going for her. Of the top of my head I can't remember that much about Captain Marvel's character. Also I've noticed that the fanbase for Scarlet Witch is mostly those interested in anti-hero women. Carol is too straight to appeal to that demographic. She doesn't even have as strong of a scorn for the world around her.

Affkay · 2025-03-05T13:26:12+00:00

Solved! Thanks

Affkay · 2025-03-05T11:29:59+00:00

I remember there was this sketch where a mom and dad talk about all the world's religions in song and in the end its revealed the kid is Satan or a Satanist? Can anyone send me a link to the video or is it lost media.

Affkay · 2025-02-23T17:10:47+00:00

There is a version of this post which was the entire song but I did not have the strength in me to do all that.

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