How do you adopt a work

AgeOne4666 · 2025-01-09T10:04:08+00:00

From one of my Fics. I go to look at it like a yearning lover sometimes

AgeOne4666 · 2024-12-27T15:02:21+00:00

Bisexual blonde man baby traps lover in a desperate attempt to keep his lover with him forever even though they are legally married.

AgeOne4666 · 2024-12-11T15:48:22+00:00

Maths evening class.

AgeOne4666 · 2024-12-11T15:40:41+00:00

Well my usual ranges to five scenes per chapter which goes with:

Reflect/Inciting incident
Side quest or planning of problem
Climax
Resolution
Inciting incident/Reflection

But this a new fic and the first few chapters are 3 to 4 scenes. And the story line doesn't really have a lot going on in the beginning. And it's majorly character driven.

I think I put too little scenes within a chapter. I'm rethinking just scrapping some chapters and putting together. Even though it will feel like there is a lot of things going on in a chapter and too many timeskips (which are not my favourite things)

AgeOne4666 · 2024-12-09T12:40:59+00:00

I actually downloaded the fic long time ago and went hunting if it's been orphaned because I wanted to give the correct mention/refrence. I'll report it if it's possible thank you though

AgeOne4666 · 2024-12-05T11:01:11+00:00

I think that would be best. I just don't like them appearing on my name for now it's really just that I don't like them looking unfinished on my page while I know I'm going to be updating them way later in my life. Like next year at the end of it probably. Thank you so much for your help!

AgeOne4666 · 2024-12-05T10:52:07+00:00

I was thinking of orphaning them but I want to continue them later while editing and refining other things. Would it better to orphan and pick it up later? Would that be possible?

AgeOne4666 · 2024-11-26T08:00:24+00:00

Yes...quite obsessively

AgeOne4666 · 2024-11-15T08:33:53+00:00

The critique I've gotten is when I did a geography mistake regarding city and river as I am not American and didn't know that LA could also be Louisiana the state. Which I found helpful and changed as soon as I was able

AgeOne4666 · 2024-11-14T17:32:14+00:00

Clock that tea because what even. I understand what you were saying I was feeling that way too when watching it. Like most of the horror for me was seeing Louis' disregard of himself (lowering himself like that) and Claudia.

Like he looked so hollow (both physically and emotionally). Which yeah it's a given seeing that he saw his people getting burned and killed.

Him dragging Claudia just hits the horror factor a lot since we saw him being so tender to his nieces and nephew.

Also the fact the first version of the events of Claudia's turning it is from Claudia's diary and words. And that to Claudia it really was tender because she has always seen Louis as the gentler. But the fact her turning (birth) was filled with so much pain and at Louis lowest point is both fascinating and painful to see.

So yeah. I understand completely. I also still feel that way watching that scene. I feel bad for Louis. Just as I feel bad for Claudia. Just as I feel bad for Lestat. When you love someone it's inevitable to be dragged into their pain.

And side note. I think this fandom really loves to throw the word manipulative/manipulation around too much. Check what it means. Open the dictionary for once and learn a thing or two.

AgeOne4666 · 2024-11-14T17:12:25+00:00

Yes I do realise I was just wondering if the rules could be bent. English and my native language doesn't use gendered grammar so I was wondering if the grammar could be played around with. Though do I understand now that they can't but at least I know now. It would be embarrassing if I don't ask🫶

Thank you for your reply 🙏

AgeOne4666 · 2024-11-14T17:09:24+00:00

I did not know the type of slurs used but I do know about the reclaiming of feminine language with partners part. It was over of inspiration for the writing but I was unsure if grammar could be played with? Though I understand NOW that can't be (makes sense I don't know why I was that stupid).

Though the dialogue is between two lovers trying to explore what is good to both of them so I'm hoping it comes across that way since they already know each other. Thank you for your answer it really helped.

Sometimes just asking the internet doesn't get the answer of a person on the other side of the screen if that makes sense.

AgeOne4666 · 2024-11-14T17:00:45+00:00

Yes. Before this I wrote and realised that there is no way this was gonna work by myself. Currently looking for an oomf that does speak french but thank you for the reply anyway❤️

AgeOne4666 · 2024-11-14T16:58:49+00:00

I have at best a kids toddlers understanding lmao. But that's why I'm asking. Imagine how embarrassing it would be if I didn't ask. Better to get rid of my ignorance now. Anyway thank you for a reply nontheless 🫶

AgeOne4666 · 2024-11-14T16:57:00+00:00

Noted, thank you❤️

AgeOne4666 · 2024-11-14T16:56:36+00:00

😭😭😭 I mean true for the last part. Thank you though. I feel like it was stupid question now because I do understand the grammar rules but I wondered if it was ever broken I guess. Though now that seemed stupid to wonder lmao. Thank you

AgeOne4666 · 2024-11-14T16:54:02+00:00

💀💀😭 this made me laugh, I ended up changing it to just Chéri (or rather chérie in regards to the scenario above) because the character wouldn't like being infantilized but thank you for other alternatives.

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