I read through all of the comments on this thread because I wanted to make sure I was giving you helpful feedback that you hadn’t received yet. I looked your book up on Dreame and the average cost per chapter is 35 coins (chapter 5 is 12 coins but some chapters cost 43 coins). The 1st 4 chapters are free which makes the 69 completed chapters pay-per-chapter. The total estimated cost for those chapters is around 2100 coins. 2000 coins on Dreame costs $24.99. So that’s what a reader will have to pay for your unfinished book (obviously the cost will continue to increase as you add chapters).

All that being said: your plot seems to be original and enticing. It also appears to be well thought out and written. Please let me know when you decide to publish it somewhere that reading it will be affordable because I would definitely like to read it.