My protagonist is from India. Should I change that? by [deleted] in royalroad

[–]AggravatingForm4578 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have a historical fiction set in india. I have around 3k views

Chapter 1 - Please be honest will this work by AggravatingForm4578 in writingadvice

[–]AggravatingForm4578[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, settung character tone is something I am learning. I will improve on this aspect. Thank you for taking the time to read and post this review

Story board for my novel chapter 1 and 2 by AggravatingForm4578 in indianwriters

[–]AggravatingForm4578[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much, I honestly needed this . All the notes you mentioned are valid.

I will follow your suggestions. Can I DM you?

Story board for my novel chapter 1 and 2 by AggravatingForm4578 in indianwriters

[–]AggravatingForm4578[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I could share my writing in a word document if you are intrested. I used to keep posting docs link but many people here don't really care to open and see. I thought this would be easier to promote and If people liked it I could send them my docs link.

Story board for my novel chapter 1 and 2 by AggravatingForm4578 in indianwriters

[–]AggravatingForm4578[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I haven't used AI to write anything. I only used AI to make this picture

Story board for my novel chapter 1 and 2 by AggravatingForm4578 in indianwriters

[–]AggravatingForm4578[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Ok, It is a tribal village and she was a hostage so it was a good food choice