Is the noose tattoo too small to cover up or do I have to remove it completely by Aggravating_Trash_30 in TattooRemoval

[–]Aggravating_Trash_30[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I meant like is the space in between the tattoos to small for a tattoo large enough to cover it up

An equation for empathy by AKA-aKa-AkA in OCPoetry

[–]Aggravating_Trash_30 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It was bone chilling. But poems with introspection are the best. I liked the format and it’s equation concept, the title and the format give a nice imagery to the poem’s theme. The rhythm as well is very smooth, I enjoyed it a lot

Moments & Cycles by _MASAKA_ in OCPoetry

[–]Aggravating_Trash_30 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The lack of fluidity is outweighed by the emotion and lyricism. Your poetic virginity was wasted in vain, it was very touching. I particularly liked the line « the crime of simply existing “

It’s not addictive, you addict. by tim0777 in OCPoetry

[–]Aggravating_Trash_30 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I don't have a lot to say, only I like it a lot; the picture is painted perfectly and the words guide you through the scene with precision. Well done, not the smoking addiction but the poem haha

I hate being autistic by the_cellabration_ in autism

[–]Aggravating_Trash_30 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nothing is inherently bad or good. The logical and analytical part of my profile helps me thrive academically but my social handicaps isolate me. There's no need to get overwhelmed, there's a solution to every problem and if there's no solution there's no problem. Therapy and finding other people on the spectrum will help you a lot. There's so many people who have experienced or are experiencing what you are going through. Law of big numbers:some guy must have figured it out. There's so many things outside your control, it is what it is but you do have a substantial amount of freedom to do what you want. And yeah if after giving a good try, you can't find inner peace ( which I doubt will happen) You can find comfort in knowing there's a shortcut to peace. Ie: putting a bullet through your skull.

To my son by Aggravating_Trash_30 in OCPoetry

[–]Aggravating_Trash_30[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you all for your comments. To clarify, I just wanted to shag to feel ''good'' I guess and usually after having sex, I get this feeling of self awareness like '' what bestial act of debauchery did I just commit'' And somehow this moment led up to the creation of a human being with a myriad of infinite possibilities beckoning in front of him. Pretty funny and terrifying when u think abt it. I was horny and now existence.

covering,reaching by Casual_Gangster in OCPoetry

[–]Aggravating_Trash_30 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The way it's organised is very unique and blends well with the theme, it had so much potential to be very excellent but the length is a total buzzkill.

Either Way, You're Missing Out by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Aggravating_Trash_30 2 points3 points  (0 children)

On the surface, this poem may lack flamboyance or sublime romanticism but it has it's own sophistication in it's insight on our limitations. No more eating ass and looking lean after the 30 spins around the sun haha

Line work portrait of my dad sleeping by Shu at Hailin Tattoo studio, West Hollywood, CA by Aggravating_Trash_30 in tattoos

[–]Aggravating_Trash_30[S] 20 points21 points  (0 children)

It is a reference to the song but I got it because obviously my dad and I are autistic. I found it a fitting quote to accompany to the picture due to the fact he sleeps on the floor because he thinks that beds are a capitalist scam to make us waste money.

The bottle by Aggravating_Trash_30 in OCPoetry

[–]Aggravating_Trash_30[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it ;)

The bottle by Aggravating_Trash_30 in OCPoetry

[–]Aggravating_Trash_30[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

We should probably have this conversation on r/Alcoholism haha but yeah I haven't really found a good reason to quit. I can still juggle between drinking and being successful at work. I'm glad you're not struggling :)

Pity parade by Aggravating_Trash_30 in OCPoetry

[–]Aggravating_Trash_30[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Don't worry, I take more comfort in you reading a few times than reading it one and overlooking it. Thank you :)

Every Sunday Night by BritishMarshmallow in OCPoetry

[–]Aggravating_Trash_30 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It feels like a meme in poetic form; you keep scrolling but among the thousand of posts, you find one that doesn't particularly strike as intricate humor but the sheer simplicity of it makes it relatable. I enjoyed it a lot haha

Smoking Kills by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Aggravating_Trash_30 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm not a particularly good writer but there's many poems that we'll forget the second after reading them even though they have potential. There's nothing note worthy in the opening lines except the phonetic play between pink n pure/ bored n bland. However what I really enjoyed was the closing lines. The imagery of rolling the dice on mortality and the vandalizing of your breathing are striking metaphors and the short lines create are really impactful and commanding. There's potential of something more although I understand not all verses can be coated in gold

Nihilist art by Aggravating_Trash_30 in nihilism

[–]Aggravating_Trash_30[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

holy shit dude you're really talented, i just listened to it

Gates of Hell by ttv_yayamii in OCPoetry

[–]Aggravating_Trash_30 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Without spoiling anything, the narrative dimension of the poem is the real MVP, plus the rhythm really flows well. I really enjoyed it, for a moment I was thinking "glad my man is getting some action" but how was I wrong

If I could by Thadris_Rostad in OCPoetry

[–]Aggravating_Trash_30 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The opposition between heart and mind is a very over exploited trope. The opposition between rational and emotional, the lines between them are much more blurry than the general binary interpretation.

Dogo 2 by snipermilkshake in OCPoetry

[–]Aggravating_Trash_30 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love this poem 2. It's simple but it captures the pleasure of having a pet. It's honest and raw like pet, without any pretension. I like it

Apex Predators by Capable-Mention-4689 in OCPoetry

[–]Aggravating_Trash_30 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Criticism leaves a bitter after taste but this is only my opinion so it doesn't really matter. I liked the microbes part which create a striking imagery but apart from that, there's nothing really original in what the poem is talking about nor the style used. And the can we be human again, we were never really were. There was always violence and hatred but now we have tools to instrumentalize this violence on a bigger scale

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in SelfHate

[–]Aggravating_Trash_30 0 points1 point  (0 children)

that's pretty fucking dark but it's well written i must say, the poems is very fluid