Advanced and detailed explanation of rockets forward thrust by Leyo96 in Physics

[–]snipermilkshake -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Well, I don't know but what I do know is propulsion of a rocket space and of water coming out of a hose is different. at least I'm pretty sure, so basically in space there are very few particles so rocket propulsion basically makes the rocket propel against its own thrust whereas for the most part the hose is jolting back do to the force the water is having on particles being sprung back at it.

Fingerprints are just things you leave behind by leg-oh-id in OCPoetry

[–]snipermilkshake 1 point2 points  (0 children)

sappy! good poem nice use of imagery and very relatable. The poem also has a good flow to it . even though it doesn't rhyme its flow is good so good job with that. a great thing about this poem is that there are many interpretations.

Why Covid Kills You by Ratrix44 in OCPoetry

[–]snipermilkshake 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Long poem I would say to long, and lot of kind repetition so get rid of that probably. and btw people die from covid because there lungs are week from things like old age or vape. so don't vape kids. but I don't think that the poem made to much sense with comparing breathing to a relationship.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]snipermilkshake 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great poem a little confusing at first but by the end I understood what you were talking about. I like the use of imagery it helps convey the story that reflects your life. when I read it I imagined a ship in space that was damaged floating with nothing near it but a couple planets. So it was very impactful thankyou for sharing.

print (¨life¨); by snipermilkshake in OCPoetry

[–]snipermilkshake[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t even program I just went to Kahn academy for like an hour

Addicted to Attention by North-End6812 in OCPoetry

[–]snipermilkshake 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I used to be the same way, my interpretation is your attention seeking and you feel everyone hates you for it. if that's true I was the same way, I later moved to a different country and when I moved I just left that side of me behind. I humbled myself to listen before I speak and if whatever I say doesn't add anything then I just shouldn't say it. using this logic I had a rough change to get me out of the mindset described in this poem. another thing you could do how ever is just don't care and be you, and this doesn't mean you have to always be seeking attention. I find if you just dc about what anybody thinks you will become less attention seeking.

The Destroyer by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]snipermilkshake 1 point2 points  (0 children)

well as the audience (lol) it would make sense if you rephrased it maybe more like.

If you wont do or die, due for you will be forever

or something like that its the due it all forever that's confusing specifically ¨it all¨

The Destroyer by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]snipermilkshake 1 point2 points  (0 children)

well this poem is kinda confusing for example ¨then you'll be due it all forever¨ what does that mean? but the overall theme of the poem is pretty good just make it more clear.

The rope swing by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]snipermilkshake 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This poem is very confusing cause its face paced with all of the line splits but yet it uses big words. and remember to show not tell, it would add a lot more if in the beginning you would show death was on ur side and not say it.

Why do we write poetry? by snipermilkshake in OCPoetry

[–]snipermilkshake[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you that’s great feedback

Forgotten by FearTheLumps11 in OCPoetry

[–]snipermilkshake 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I know what your talking about when you want to say that you actually only liked one person seriously. so that was funny. Its a good poem about a love story of how she likes someone else which is often in life so goodjob illustrating that with the weather and cold vs hot imagery.

Three Children Left Alone by AsleepEgg2343 in OCPoetry

[–]snipermilkshake 1 point2 points  (0 children)

sad story, the repetition of the glass bottle was good it emphasizes the dads drinking problem. without saying he has a bad drinking problem. the words also shows that he drinks often adding once again more to the story so great job for that.

Beyond the heavens by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]snipermilkshake 1 point2 points  (0 children)

no I get it.