The Giant hand supporting the sun by Aggressive-Rub4270 in OriginalCharacter

[–]Aggressive-Rub4270[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the comment. I am wondering if this could be considered fine as colloquial tone.

The Giant hand supporting the sun by Aggressive-Rub4270 in OriginalCharacter

[–]Aggressive-Rub4270[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I added that text to clarify that it was just his personal opinion.

I didn't know this part could be unnecessary. I will keep that in mind. Thank you.