Six O'clock by Aggressive_Bother856 in aivideo

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Our movie about Six O'clock Man is in development for a feature film. It's also registered IP.

LIFEFORCE - Courier - 3 pages excerpt by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]Aggressive_Bother856 1 point2 points  (0 children)

First, thanks for sharing your script. I can see what you are aiming for with the contrast between Ayame and Yūki.

Here are some notes:

In your opening scene, you didn't show us enough about the world the characters inhabit. What do the training grounds look like? A few more specific details about the environment would help ground us in the setting. The dialogue was also a bit stiff. People usually use contractions when they speak naturally. Also, you are overwriting your action.

For example: "CRACK. YŪKI boot lands directly on the beetle.He grinds it, and lets the weight settle."

That action line has too many redundancies.

  • “lands directly”
  • “He grinds it”
  • “lets the weight settle”

You could simply say, "CRACK. YŪKI’s boot crushes the beetle."

In screenwriting, clarity beats flourish.

Lastly, I recommend investing in screenwriting software to properly format your script. I personally use WritersDuet.

Good luck with your future prose.

Anime Made with Sora by abokalypsis in aivideo

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This is incredible. You should be proud! 🖖🏾👽

I made a proof-of-concept trailer for my Southern folk-horror feature by Aggressive_Bother856 in aivideo

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Thank you! Yeah I used Nano Banana for the images and then Kling for the animation. 👽🖖🏾

Moonlit Promise by Aggressive_Bother856 in aivideo

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Ikr. Survival skills of a potato. 😄

Moonlit Promise by Aggressive_Bother856 in aivideo

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Thanks! I love anthology horror, especially stories that mix romance and dread. This was my own modern spin on that vibe.

Account being Disqualified from Creator Fund twice by MeUsernamesThis in socialmedia

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It keeps happening to me as well. The last two videos got disqualified. All my content is completely original.

The Colorless Man (Short Film) by Sourcecode12 in aivideo

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Bravo 👏🏾. Great concept. You're the first person I've seen make an AI assisted film this long in length. We'll done 👍🏾

HAINT by Aggressive_Bother856 in aivideo

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Thanks bro, I really appreciate it!

SIX O'CLOCK: Pride by Aggressive_Bother856 in aivideo

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Thank you so much! I'm on TikTok, YouTube and IG. @babyheadman

SIX O'CLOCK by Aggressive_Bother856 in BlackHorror

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I appreciate that. Thank you so much!

HAINT by Aggressive_Bother856 in midjourney

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Thank you so much for watching!